hiya! i like your story so far even though nothing much has happened yet. haha! i think the characters are quite original. anyways i hope you update soon ^_^

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awww, thats sweet. but i think you spend a little too much time describing the characters and not enough time telling the story. what happens?

Author's Response: I know, the first few chapters are mainly descriptive and really slow, and stuff... but it speeds up soon, i promise. Just keep reading :)

xxx

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that wuz good

FUN N KISSES

Author's Response: Thanks :) x

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Aw! That's cute! A 10 from me!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

x

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I don't think I;ve ever read a story about outcasts at Hogwarts...except for Snape. Good story! A 10 from me!

Author's Response: Thanks alot :)

x

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aw the ending of this chapter is sweet! its a really good story, very well written and the characters are quite convincing! hope you update soon..

Author's Response: Thanks alot :)


I'll update asap.

x

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oh its so cute (=^_^=)
i really love it so far and i hope u do/are doing/did well on ur finals.
cant wait to read more
grade= A+

Author's Response: The Exams are going ok, i guess. Scary, but not as bad as I expected. Thanks :)

And Yeah, the time i should be spending revising, is being spent on this. Next chapter soon :)

xxxx

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Aw; this chapter is so cute! I like the way you've kind of thrown the marauders in there, but they aren't hugely important to the story. I love the way you decribe the way they act, and the little thing about flowery curtains.

Another Chapter Soon Please?

xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, and dont you just hate flowery curtains ??

xxx

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It was great! You should definitly do at least one more chapter.
cheers
li
10/10


Author's Response: Hey there!

Thanks for Reviewing, it means alot. There is another chapter waiting to be validated.

xxx

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Gosh I loved it. It was totally awesome. That's all I can think of to say. 10/10. Cna't wait for the next. GOod luck.

Author's Response: Wow; thank you... Chapter two is waiting to be validated, and hopefully, should't be too long *fingers crossed*

Cathy.xx

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Hey Cathy!!

Want to know my honest opinion? It's rubbish.

No, I'm joking, obviously. I think its actually pretty good, i mean, it's a brilliant beginning, and I'm sure this story'll go great, and stuff, and Everyone will love it. It is, honestly, really good. And this is the story your putting Lyric in then. Lyric is Cathy's favourite name, she wants to call her first daughter Lyric.

Anyway. Just mind your spacing.

Love Soph x


Author's Response: Thanks Soph...

Cathy.xx

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I love all of the names in this story...lyric =] how cool? xD

I also liked the way you kind of told a story for each character in the opening instead of doing one character per chapter and making us wait...it worked well =)

Update soon =]


Author's Response: I know, Lyric is one of my favourite names, ever, I love it, I think it's so romantic.

And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Chapter two will be up shortly. Keep reading?

Cathy.xx

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it's interesting. kinda short but that's ok for the first chapter. try and make the others longer please. and continue soon :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I always seem to start with a short chapter. Most the others will be longer.

And I'm halfway through chapter two, so it shouldn't be too long before I submit it.

Thanks for reviewing.

Cathy.xx

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