{reviewid: 2263975, reviewer: 'hpfan3703'}
7th December 2009:
hey please update!! this is a great story
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{reviewid: 1898016, reviewer: 'lovette'}
17th April 2008:
please continue love it
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{reviewid: 1894937, reviewer: 'lovette'}
14th April 2008:
please continue love it
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{reviewid: 1892804, reviewer: 'Cheeo'}
12th April 2008:
Oh, wow this is really good so far! Please hurry and come out with another chapter! As in, like now!
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{reviewid: 1882586, reviewer: 'SIK'}
31st March 2008:
why those this story keep getting updated in there is no new chapter?
Author's Response: cause I'm editing the story; it said so on the synopsis that I'm editing all the chapter.
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{reviewid: 1878309, reviewer: 'Regulus_Black'}
27th March 2008:
Good story, but theres a lot of spelling errors.
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{reviewid: 1849776, reviewer: 'Terapsin'}
1st March 2008:
Please get next chapter soon!
I cant wait for it. And How you are thinking to shock Harry and Hermione a both Tawny is their doter and the every wan else from the gang too tell them about they are there children!!!
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{reviewid: 1843708, reviewer: 'Pyrogin'}
25th February 2008:
Why it say you habe new chapter cuz I can'y find it.
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{reviewid: 1842704, reviewer: 'Regulus_Black'}
24th February 2008:
Good, but you really need to work on the spelling and grammer.
Author's Response: Yeah I know, I really need to get a beta for this story. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1835196, reviewer: 'Fanfair'}
18th February 2008:
your story is so interesting please do continue
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{reviewid: 1832030, reviewer: 'ev11000'}
15th February 2008:
yay god powers :p i love em they allways bring fun just 1 thing what happens if they're on fire and hold hands? big boom?
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{reviewid: 1813269, reviewer: 'candy-codedgoodness'}
31st January 2008:
Ha I get it with their last names and cool I can't wait unti lthe next chapter
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{reviewid: 1803141, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
23rd January 2008:
I loved it, it was well worth the wait. I liked the change round of surnames to did for tawny's friends. I am even more convinced she is a harmony child.
100/10
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{reviewid: 1731616, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
29th November 2007:
awwe, I feel really sorry for Tawny(nice name by the way)post more soon, i love this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the name, not that many people are named Tawny.
I'll update as soon as I can
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{reviewid: 1726957, reviewer: 'candy_coded_goodness'}
25th November 2007:
whoa I feel as if i haven't seen this story in forever cool chapter bad cliffy
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{reviewid: 1726125, reviewer: 'hanoverpretz01'}
25th November 2007:
woww
i really like this story
are we gonna get anything more about snape?
Author's Response: I well he comes in later, I just need to do a little things with Tawny before I put snape in the story
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{reviewid: 1717145, reviewer: 'lily_potter_evens'}
19th November 2007:
i bloody knew it. i KNEW she was from the future, ok she is harry and hermiones kid isn't she. oh post sooon i need to know.
Author's Response: lol maybe you'll find out soon, but there is going to be a lot of drama in the up coming chapters
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{reviewid: 1717143, reviewer: 'lily_potter_evens'}
19th November 2007:
WOW so much to take in. So Harry and Hermione are heirs, interesting.
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{reviewid: 1717135, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
19th November 2007:
omg what happened, surely they weren't THAT on fire for each other (get it, on fire,there hands hehe)omg, i gotta fly straight to the next chapter WHOSH
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{reviewid: 1717126, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
19th November 2007:
hm. Now i'm confused. Did they brake up in the future, is that why tawnys here. is she trying to get them together. if she is I LIKE HER ALOT teehee.Keep up the good work Tawny.
Author's Response: You'll have to find out
but thank you for the review
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{reviewid: 1717115, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
19th November 2007:
ok i changed my mind on my last review i no longer think tawny is harrys twin, i think she is his and hermiones daughter from the future. The clues i'e
“she remind me of Harry, just by staring at her I can see Harry’s smile and that sparkle in his eyes when he’s happy.
and
Hermione she looks like you, are you sure that you don’t have a long lost sister or something?
I am now convinced she is thier daughter.
Author's Response: maybe, but it'll be awhile before you know or not
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{reviewid: 1717108, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
19th November 2007:
hmm shes harrys sister i just know it. oh on to next chapter i go.
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{reviewid: 1717102, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
19th November 2007:
awwe so cute. teehee, i hope they get it on, they are so right for each other those two.
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{reviewid: 1715113, reviewer: 'Owww%20Yea'}
17th November 2007:
Omg that was good lol keep writing
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{reviewid: 1714234, reviewer: 'converse_rocks345'}
17th November 2007:
Hey if you need a beta I'd Love to be it.
Author's Response: Thanks, but I found one already.
But Thank you for asking!
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