If thats the end of the book i am mad at u. That is so awesome!!! I dont know how u think of stuff like that. Omg thats so good. I couldnt stop reading. Write more!!!

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So this is good and I can definitely see the change in your writing style from the beginning of the story to this point. I look forward to see where you go from here.

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Oh my goodness I loved it! I cried at all the part it mentioned about Uncle Tom. :( Please update soon! It's a really good story!

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Update! i really like this story! or do u still have writer's block? that sucks, i hate it when that happens. But if not, try to update!

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OMC!!lurrrveyit!:}

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ohmygosh you do not know how happy i was to see you update i was about to give up on this story but luckily you updated in time thank you but promise you'll update soon

Author's Response: nooo dont give up :)!!! I'm glad you didn't. Should be updating in a few days!

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Hate you? No! Never!
I am so glad you updated! I enjoy this story immensely, however, I haven't read it in a long time since there haven't been any updates, so I forgot how awesome this was! Writer's block is indeed a terrible thing...
Hopefully, you will update soon? It would be much appreciated, I'm sure!
Good luck with your writing!!

Author's Response: started the next chapter, but should update in a few days! sorry for the wait.

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haha i like this story a whole bunch.

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Are you going to write more in the story??? Please do so, because this story is awesome and I don't know how you can put it onto paper or computer, for that matter. I always seem to think of something and have the words, but can never explain them clearly enough.

Overall, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY good story. Please write somemore...but only if this isn't the end.

Author's Response: aww, thanks so much! I should be updating in a few days because I'm going on a 6 hour trip, so i should be able to write on the way :P. I need something to keep me sane. I hate long car rides.

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I really likke the story so far. But that part where her Uncle Tom died... that is very sad. Whst does the parents do for a living? You haven't told that in the story so far.

Author's Response: you might find out but its not really that big of a role in the story. all you really have to know is that they aren't around that much.

you'll probably find out though.

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Hey!! Great to have you back! Um, really good chapter, little confuzzling, I had to go back and read, but it was still really good! Writer's block is so annoying! I have that alot myself and it really gets frustrating. Anywho, great job and I look forward to more chapters! 10/10

Author's Response: hee, thanks! sorry if you were confused =[, I think I got a bit over-excited about writing this... it didn't quite come out how i wanted it to, but whatever.

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THIS STORY=AWESOME! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. LOTS OF POTENTIAL!

~GIGI (:

Author's Response: thank you! i'll try to update soon.

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Omg, i love it! Pretty please get the next chapter out soon!

Author's Response: thanks! and i'll try.

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Good story but why doesn't Sirius just tell her that he likes her.. guys... haha. Awesome chapter!! Update soon!

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LOVE IT! (in oprea tones) Cheers, update soon!

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I've only read the first chapter and already I like your story! So Sirius + Gabrielle ey?...hmm...I like it. You seem like a great writer. Keep it up
Hugs, phoenixfire46

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I loved it! I'm kind of happy Sirius is jealous but that was really mean what he said! :7)

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Yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved this one! :7)

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Bleh! That must stink to have a mother like that! I loved it! Why did they call her Ellie though? I love what Uncle Tom did to the boys. That was funny! :7)

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Sirius is so sweet! I loved it! :7) Poor Remus and Gabby!

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He was soo going to ask her out or to Hogsmead or something! I feel a bit sorry for him though! I loved it! :7)

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I'm so glad Sirius stuck up for her! I loved it! I hope she's okay! Probably has a broken jaw though! :7)

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Ahh, well at least she's friends. I loved it! :7)

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She's already skipping classes on the first day! I'm sure the teachers are going to love her! Not. I loved it! Poor Sirius and Gabby! :7)

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Now I feel sorry for Sirius too! He must be so confused and sad! I think he like Gabby a bit at least! I hope Lily and she become better friends soon. I understand not having a clique and it sucks! I loved it! :7)

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