Reading Reviews for From Bones to Ashes
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Me! Chapter 2;

19th July 2007:
Great great great! I liked the "man-to-man" talk at the end! yay! update soon!

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Review #2, by Rivertail Chapter 1;

15th May 2007:
great start! this sounds to be a very promising story!

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Review #3, by bk4ev3r Chapter 1;

9th May 2007:
'Tis a wee bit confusing, but shall be overlooked, as it is the first chapter. We, the readers, don't know the story going on in your head. You can't assume we know the little details of the time frame you have chosen to place this. Just keep that in mind for future chapters. I didn't really have a problem with it until the last paragraph. Nobody said anything about lying. "Everyone" is a broad term to use there. And what is the "it" being referred to? As a general rule, I'm rather ADD when I read. As in I forgot what I was doing halfway through my Algebra II exam and stared at the second hand of the clock for half and hour (though I did end up with 100%. Go figure, cuz appearantly I can. Ha ha ha!). ... What was my point? ... Oh yes, be detailed and specific in your writing. Don't make the reader pull out associations from the middle of nowhere or make assumptions. 'Twas a good start of a story though. Cheers. : )

Author's Response: Yes, I'm working on chapter two right now as I'm trying to get the clarity level a little higher. I keep having to re-write as things aren't coming. Thank you, for the advice. I'll defiantly take it into consideration as I continue writing these chapters.

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Review #4, by ILoveLost1888 Chapter 1;

4th May 2007:
Hi! I like it. Is Harry and Ginny are together? What is this story about? 10-10! Bye Jackie

Author's Response: Thank you, Jackie. No, Harry and Ginny are not together and that will become evident in the next chapter. It's really about Harry/Ginny but it also has Ron/Hermione story tied in. Thank you.

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Review #5, by CommodoreMerlinette Chapter 1;

4th May 2007:
This story is really good! Please update soon! =D

Author's Response: Thank You. I'm just waiting for validation, now.

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