Very well written. A lovely piece. Love does conquer all.
Keep writing.Author's Response: You know I think you are right, thanks for commenting Report Review
I liked that, it was a neat take on the final battle. Couple of spelling errors, like wherever is one word, not two. Pretty goodAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review, also thanks for telling me about an error, most reviewers give no indication as to which words they think are wrong so it makes a refreshing change to see you point it out. Report Review
NUUU!!! NOT LUCIUS! AHHh! *tear* Ok. I kow he is evila nd all..but he is still hot ok? Anyway.. Very good. I love this. It's so...powerful. It's like everytime you say something about love you heart gives a lurch. I don't know what I'm saying but I'm sure you know what I mean right? Ok..awesome.Author's Response: Thank you for he ver kind words, Sorry about old Lucy but he is just a tad on the nasty side. again thanks for reviewing Report Review
awe that was the cuitest!!
there was a few spelling mistakes and i cant see voldemort getting on his kness and begging, that was too ooc for me... but i loved it all the same.
~hlj~Author's Response: Hi thanks for taking time out. As for old Voldy socks I imagine him just like all bullies plain cowards when they meet someone their equal or better still like Harry stronger. anyway thats my excuse and I am sticking to it. Report Review
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