You're breaking my heart! Well done, though - very angsty! Paloma

Author's Response: Um thanks:)

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That was sad! I would hate for Ron to die, since I love him to pieces!

There were a few grammar errors, and you switched tenses in the last bit. Otherwise, good job!

Author's Response: Yes, I would hate fot Ron to die but... he is so eazy to kill, he just is:) Thanks:)

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i found it a little vauge, i think I would have like it more if you had actually gone into the story instead of just using an exerpt

Author's Response: OK thanks (I really need to redo these stories:)

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Honey I'm confused is he dead or alive? This is brilliant your very talented... snaps to you

Author's Response: Alive:) Thanks:)

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Oh wow! yay! does that mean ron isn't dead!?!?!
yay! i'm happy!!
lovely fic!! 10/10!!
going in my faves and you in my fave authors!!
XxX wired2damoon XxX

Author's Response: Ron never died, and thatnks I will go lok at your stories:)

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Awww, that was really good. I hope that Ron doesn't really die in the last book :(. By the way, in the begininng, you have my hart died with him, instead of my heart died with him. Also, at the end, you have and leave behind and angel, instead of and leave behind an angel. Just thought you might like to know. Great story, though.

Author's Response: Thanks I am going back soon to corect every thing once I get some more stories out of my head. I just got over writers block:)

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