i like it.
but i think remus feels to bad for himself.Author's Response: yah, he is kind of self pitying himself and i suppose he probably wouldn't usually do that
but i imagine it would be after a harsh transformation and he realizes that his friends that became illegal animagus for him were all gone and he just felt so alone...
i'd probably have a moment of self pity if i were in his shoes :/
and thanks for the review!! Report Review
This is good. It's quite pessimistic though.
And don't try pessimism it won't work anyway. (LOL)
I like your writing style.
on a scale of 1 being worst and 10 being best I give you a 5/6
meAuthor's Response: Thank you. X]
I tend to lean towards pessamism at times, but I do believe I'm improving! Yay!
But yeah, I wrote this a while back and in context with the lyrics of the song.
But thank you anyways :D Report Review
it was good and i think you are amazing! you made me a favorite author! i feel so special. wait, did you read one of my stories? if so, did you review? if you did, i don't remember it. (i will check back there soon tho!) ah, remus. would you like to hear the order of the guys from hp in my heart. well it goes sirius, george, remus, regulus, draco, fred, ( not sure why george is up higher, but he is.) neville,(who wouldn't love neville?) cedric,(tho i'm ashamed to admit it)james, ron, harry. well that's it and my list makes no sense at all but i am me and it can't(becasue i am me!) review if oyu haven't and you are a favorite author of mine now.( i think)Author's Response: Whoa. Ya, that's what I said. Hehe. Ok. Thank you soooo much! And yes, I did. And no, I didn't just yet, but that's kinda why I favorited you, so that I can read your stories later, cuz I'm kinda outta the country and at my family's house, and I didn't really have time to read that much cuz I was chatting w/ my friends online. So, yah...sorry. But I WILL read your stories, they do look interesting. And I love Remus. And that's a very interesting list. I never really would list all the characters, mostly just the Marauders, because they're my favorite! But I do also like Draco and Regulus too. And the twins. And then Ron and Harry. Mostly in that order. And don't worry, I know how it feels to not make sense, because I don't usually make sense either, I usually just cut myself off before I confuse people or I just go and ahead and confuse them! And I will. I caught the net signal so I'm gonna try to read your stories before I eat (noodles!!!!!). And thank you. And thank you for the totally, awesomely tubular review! Hehe! Report Review
i am on the verge of tears. poor remus. he is my favorite maurader next to sirius. this was very well written.Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I am very appreciative of it (?). Thanks again! Report Review
Loved your story. It felt like you were going through his mind, and acctually got to hear his side of the story, instead of Harry's tragic views all the time. The song goes along well with it as well. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yah, I tried to like portray how Remus felt, like how he lost his friends and all, and that Harry's not the only one who is alone. Thanks again! I really appreciate the review! Report Review
love system of a down! you have good music taste lol, just to let you know chapter 2 of Aurora is up if you wanna go have a look, I really like your writing style!Author's Response: Yah! They may not have the best words, but they are pretty good. And I have no idea how they found their way into my ipod...Hmm, it was fate! Lol, j/k. And yah, I was gonna check out ch. 2 when I had time, and am going to soon! And thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it. A lot. And thanks for liking my style! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! /D Report Review
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