Ha! This is great; I just read through all nine chapters and feel obligated to demand more.
Valerie is amazing, for super serious, and I think it would be unfair of you not to write more.
Plus, also, 10/10.Author's Response: Gosh! Thank you! I've recently started uni and am living away from home, so I have a lot more free time on my hands and nothing to distract me, so I am thinking of taking it up again and actually finishing it this time! Report Review
Just began reading this story, and I love it! Very funny, and I love Vallie. She'll probably kill me for calling her that, but oh well. I wonder why Lily laughed instead of cursed. Surprising! Report Review
It's so funny! I love it! But please do not under any circumstaces let Valeris be a man! Hahaha...xD But I would enjoy that thought! It's funny as hell..:) Report Review
yay! lil & val friends for ever!
oh and yes, lils and val falling in love sounds great!Author's Response: haha, thank you! I thought it was a fabulous idea too! Report Review
lol. you are an odd duck... but the story is still very cute :)Author's Response: Thank you. That is the highest compliment I have ever received. Or at least the most sincere. Report Review
Why is the story called Hayden if he is such a minor character? Other than that this story is fabulous. She is a replica of me. No joke.Author's Response: Well, basically I had no idea what to call it and then I thought, hey, why don't I call it Hayden. And that was that. Report Review
Im loving this story so far :)
I feel sorry for 'V-Dog' :( :P
Hope you update soon, i'll be reading this story until the very end!! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you. Yeah, voo didn't stick, did it? Report Review
Fab story!!! Loving it so far :)
Liking hers and sirius' relationship and also how she's how a proper slytherin should be; mean :P Some people make them too nice :P
xAuthor's Response: Exactly, they are Slytherins for a reason, right? haha. Report Review
SUFJAN STEVENS is in your banner.
Therefore, you have totally roped me in.Author's Response: Isn't he fabulous!? Seriously I just want to marry him. :D Report Review
This is brilliant! I'm amazed. I definately love this story! Hayden is so cute and Valerie's train of thought is hillariously entertaining. Please update as soon as you can! :)
MadsAuthor's Response: Woohoo! Thank you! Yeah I'm writing the next chapter as we speak, it should be in line by the end of the day. Report Review
Hey I just read all of this story and completly love it!
The Slytherin girls are just amazing! really enjoying the story and hope there is another chapter soon!Author's Response: Ooh, cool! Thank you! Yeah, the next chapter is being written right now! Report Review
me likey- didnt review earlier cos i went thru the whole thing in one go :-)
LOVED the end of the last chapter- lolAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
I've been waiting for a update for MONTHS now!
apdate faster damnit!
10/10 for a good chapter though,
-10/10 for updating on time,
LisaAuthor's Response: Thanks, I've updated again, it's a pity I get so distracted so easily, but I'm seriously trying this time :) Report Review
Awww. Update soon! You can't leave it there!Author's Response: Sorry, I'll try and update soon. Report Review
Lol, the Bilbe? Ahahahaha. I enjoyed that a lot, I love reading about the magic's view on religion.Author's Response: Yeah, it is an odd conception. Report Review
That was a good chapter, I really liked it. I don't like Flint though, what a tool.Author's Response: Thanks :D Report Review
The last paragraph needs some work, other than that top stuff.Author's Response: Yeah, I've been told that. I should get onto it. Report Review
Awww. Hayden sounds so cute, and I think I could grow to like Erica a lot, she seems cool.Author's Response: Thanks. Report Review
I love that she isn't that good at anything, yet she is also the epitome of what everyone wants to be. She is a great character, well done!Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Okay, you need to edit this, but apart from that it is really good, I love your sense of humour.Author's Response: Ty. Report Review
you're chapter titles are funny as.
And hey, i'm not affraid to leave you a comment, ahaha.
I just hope you keep updating, because as far as I can tell you don't update very often. that's a worry lolAuthor's Response: Wow, I guess you're right. Thanks for the review.. Report Review
nice sucking up there at the end hahaha, well, well, well, you sneak.
I love Valerie, she's such a tool!Author's Response: Yeah, she gets a bit annoying from here on in though.... Report Review
Flint sounds like a babe, i can't wait to hear more from him lol
well, i do think that that last bit wasn't very well done. only because you didn't build up to it, there was no emotion in it whatsovever.Author's Response: I have to agree with you there. i should probably edit it a bit more. Report Review
Gosh, I really get Erica, she seems like a typical character, but not 2D if you get what i mean?
anyway, keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks for that. I would hate for her to be a 2D character. Report Review
i wish that the chapters were longer.
i wish i had a friend like valerie.Author's Response: I know, I kind of wish I had a friend like Valerie too, but I doubt we would get on very well, because Valerie is completely self absorbed, and she isn't even ashamed to admit it, I think I would prefer Erica as a friend. Report Review
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