ohgod, I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story ! It's slightly confusing but otherwise it's beautiful. And the song is like perfect. I honestly love it !

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AWW! That was so cute! I loved it! YOu did an awesome job! Please write more lily and James stories! I swear to read them! CONGRATS *Claps and lots of cookies* -Charly

Author's Response: I'll get back to writing just for you lol.

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i LOVE this song thanks for making it!

Author's Response: Thanks I enjoyed this fanfic for a long time.

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I loved the descriptions here, and this, the conflict, was just so beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much....

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Wow! I 'm a little confused about James. (Did they kidnap him? How did he get back?) But i loved the story and LIly's thoughts. L/J is awesome!!! And so are you!
Sequel???

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah I made it a bit confusing...I haven't decided if there will be a sequal or not. But I have a lot of other fanfics out there that have all the same characters. If you want to check those out. Thanks for reviewing and reading.

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Very cute! There were some typos, etc., but it hardly mattered. I really love that song and I'm so glad you wrote my favorite ship to one of my favorite songs! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you will take some time to look at my other short fics. Thanks.

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