Kit (if I'm aloud too call to that)
I really like that story. There is very littile I would change. I do think the bio could have been intoduced a little more somberly. I'm sorry i'm just so used too that being a comedic type thing. Like I said it's a wonderful story and as soon as you get your grades up, start writing
Have a Very Harry Christmas!
Hilary

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Oh great beginning. I love it. Can't wait for more. Should be soon. Right? It better be, only one chapter and you've already grabbed my attention and yanked me right into obsession. I'll end up looking just to see if there is an update every day eventually. :D I simply can't wait for the next chapter. You did a really good job with this one. And it wasn't even very long! Great job! Oh and here I go rambling again. :D Sorry. I'll just leave you with these few words.

Love it.
Please Update soon.
15/10
GreenIcePrincess

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i really like it i hope you can update soon
i give it a 100 if i could lol :D
but i can only give it a 10 :'(
the site gives you a 10 i give you a 100

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I can't wait to read more!

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Woah! :O Awesome start! ^^
10/10

Good luck with school :)

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BRILLIANT!

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Very nice-but I do enjoy the happy endings of some stories... maybe this will give me a different idea

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heyy update! i really wanna keep reading!!!

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Great start! Can't wait to read more. Good luck with the workload... its tough enough in GCSE so I can only imagine what you're going through. Toodle pip! ;)

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