I think this is a pretty good start, especially seeing as it's your first fanfic. I really liked the beginning of this chapter. Harry's duel with Voldemort was well written. "A few hundred thousand people want you dead, so I felt obliged to help them"... - I especially liked that sentence. I didn't think the transition to the second part was very good, but transitions are always hard... Your language isn't perfect, but you write well, and your story has peaked my interest. Continue soon. Report Review
Hey, sorry i cant read your story cause its got spoilers,
But as soon as i read the 7th book i'll read yours.
I'm sure its good.
Chat l8erAuthor's Response: K kwl thx any way!
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Ah, I definately like this 7ns, a fantastic start to what promises to be a brilliant story, Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming, I'm hooked!Author's Response: Thx for the support:) it's going to be great!!! Hope you enjoy it. Report Review
I enjoyed your portrayal of Harry: a little crazy and finally going to finish off Voldemort. After years of torment, lack of a normal life, destroying the last horcrux, Harry's character is what I think it would be. Good job! Please post again soon!Author's Response: Thank you for the support! It's my first ever attempt at wrighting HPFF so hope you enjoy it. Will post asap!THX:) Report Review
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