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Review #1, by Leanne Malfoy Chapter One

9th August 2007:
That was good. I liked it. You should update. Actually, this is one of your stories I have never read, but now I have so I've read them all! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks Leanne...

*mumble grumble*

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Review #2, by SpellPheonix Chapter One

28th June 2007:
That was great!! It was a little rushed and I thought a little too soon to have a girl's parents die and the chapter was too short and I needed more because it was the so good but other than that it was good. James is so sweet and Poor Lily . Actually poor James. Never gets a yes. Anyway i love the personalities!!! Again make the chapters longer and less ru8shed and it would be really good. And plz don't make things happen too suddenly. Although having Lily's parents die added effect to the story, pulled you in, and showed how caring James was. Plz update soon because it is a really great story!! *smiles* I just love James and Lily stories! 8/10. This is great and in my favorites. Sorry if this review was annoying. Good bye!!! (:(:

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! It's my first James/Lily fic, so everything you said really helps!

The reveiw wasn't annoying at all- thanks!


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Review #3, by Luckygurl102 Chapter One

18th June 2007:
OMG! This story is good, I gots a bit confused and all, but I still loved it. You may win!

Author's Response: Thanks Teresa...!

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Review #4, by Pink_Princess12 Chapter One

25th May 2007:
I loved it! Good word choice!
You reviewed on one of my stories, Home, that you wanted me to make another won, and I'm working on it, but I was wondering if, in the mean time, you wanted to be friends. Like over email or something.
If so, let me know!

Author's Response: Sure! mine's (don't ask) and I still totally want to read that sequel!

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Review #5, by Divine_Till_Night Chapter One

25th April 2007:
Like it. I think, personal oppinion, that it is a tad confusing. But, hey, it's really good! Plz up-date soon! I'd love to read more. 10/10 Sweety
PS: I shouldn't talk. I am a very confusing person! 8)

Author's Response: :D! I'm glad you told me it was a bit confusing; it is, I must admit. But, I wanted readers to kinda feel that way, feeling, 'hmm... this is a bit confusing, I'd better read chapter 2 so I can understand!'

:P! But, anyway, thanks for your reveiw, and I'm glad you told me that it was confusing! I'll try and fix that in chapter 2! XD!

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Review #6, by azncutiebear3 Chapter One

25th April 2007:
POST MORE! I seriously want to know what the letter said! Post more pretty please. =]

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm defineatly going to finish this story, though!

And, I'm with you, I want to know what the letter says too! Lol, just kidding!

bUt, I'll make sure I include the letter!

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Review #7, by lilypotter16 Chapter One

25th April 2007:
omg i love it!
so sad about her parents dying though :(-
however i vote you update so we can see theme become a happy couple

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! *huggels*

Right now I'm on my grandma's computer, so I won't update straight away, sorry!

So glad you loved it!

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