Wow, i thought it was really good! It's hard to do something that so closely ties in with the book, but you wrote it very nicely. I liked how you included parts from the book too, it gave it just the right touch. Good job~!Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\\\'m glad you liked reading it. Report Review
Awww, that was horrible =(
In a good way though, it was beautifully written =)
10/10 =DAuthor's Response: Thanks again for the review. I'm happy you did review Report Review
For a first, it's pretty good. You should see my first fanfic, it was about the night day died too. ^_^ The only thing that bothered me a bit was how fast Voldemort appeared and there was no communication between James and Lily, you know? But other than that, it was pretty awesome.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I haven't read your first one yet, but I promise I will. I'm going through and editing it cause lots of people have said the same thing, so I want to fix it. It should be up by September, I hope. Report Review
wow. i like it. i think it's a very good story telling how james and lilly died. this is actually the first one i've read. but i thought it was very good.Author's Response: Thankyou for taking your time to request this, I really appreciate it. The night James and Lily dies is an interesting topic to write about. That and the Final Battle. Keep on reading... Report Review
I like it, you sort of gave it your own little twist that made that more interesting, Good job :)
~MagicAuthor's Response: Thankyou so much Magic. Report Review
Aw. . . .
i loved it.
the banner is so cote.
I think that was a very discriptive way of explaining it, but how did james did? did you mention that or not?
-RebeccaAuthor's Response: I'm not sure abou the James bit. I'll go back and maybe put that in. Thanks for reviewing Report Review
i liked that 10-10Author's Response: Thankyou. Report Review
This story is so beautiful and so believable. Like that really was what happened. It's amazing and having the lyrics in there (and I happen to love that song!) gives it that final touch. Great job! *claps*Author's Response: Thankyou. I really enjoyed writing this story.
~Amy Report Review
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