Reading Reviews for The Sins of the Father
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Review #1, by Abi Chapter 2: The Party

31st August 2013:
Wow! this story is friction amazing!

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Review #2, by Jey6 Chapter One: The Engagement

18th July 2013:
this is an amazing story bellatrix could maybe be a little more spiteful but other than that this is the best story i have read, not just hpff universe, but also in general i like the sinister but somehow normal life desiree lives.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate it a lot! It has been a little difficult to balance out the fact that she lives a very dark lifestyle but at the same time she's a 17 year old girl. We know from the books that these households do exist, (Crabbe, Goyle, Malfoy, Black, etc.) but how exactly do they live on a day-to-day basis? It's something I've had to give a lot of thought to, and have been trying to master. I'll definitely try to step-up Bellatrix's sinister-ness in future chapters. Thank you so much for your review!

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Review #3, by someone___1 Chapter One: The Engagement

26th June 2013:
No! I hate you! I was really looking forward to finding out who Desiree's fiance was going to be!!! PLEASE update quickly!

Author's Response: All will be revealed in the next chapter, I promise!

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