This streaming with emotion. Fabulos Job!
This is one of those writings that will take a while to forget.
Why did you have to kill Lupin and TOnks in your fic?Author's Response: Thanks! And I killed Lupin and Tonks because I knew they were going to die. Report Review
Wow. I mean, WOW. This story was amazing! The descriptions were remarkable and the flow was great. I usually dislike depressing stories and go for humorous ones instead and I definitely hate the Ron/Hermione,Harry/Ginny, still do, but anyway, I loved this story. The way you described everything was amazing. I almost cried at most of the parts.
I'd go for constructive critisism right now, but honestly, this was as close to perfect as perfect gets. Though, the ending couldv'e been a little stronger, but that's all.Author's Response: Thanks! And I appreciate the CC. I know what you mean, but I have no idea what kind of ending there is for that, other than going for something new, which, of course, Hermione has done. I'd appreciate any ideas you have, and you've convinced me that it's probably a good idea to look at other people's. Thanks! To the forums! Report Review
I liked this one very much, and I'm not alwasy very fond of HP fiction, but you've done this one very good! Are you in the process of writting chapters where Hermione teaches or anything after this? Like making new friends and such? Teaching new students? or something completly different?Author's Response: Thank you. No, it's a one-shot to stay. Imagine what you will! Report Review
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