It was good. You're a brilliant author, and you can cpature emotions perfectly. I hope you make another chapter. Report Review
I think you need to re-read the HP books all of the Malfoys have gray (silver) cold eyes. Report Review
This is off to a really good start! I liked the peek in on the Malfoy\'s home life, and I\'m always a sucker for Snape being shown in a compassionate light :). I look forward to reading more, and thanks for your review! (I hope I can read your Snape story sometime too.) Report Review
that was very good! write more soon! :) Report Review
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