ha ha this is so funny it had me laughing my pants off! Report Review
I loved the story but I have one problem:
Yes, this sentence made the least sense of all in the story.
Cause if you thinK Americans are wanna-be's, you're wrong.
Other than that, great story. Report Review
BAHA LOL "Oh! Dis! Score! Consider yourself dissed by the Master!" LAWWWL
man that was hilariousss
by the way how old are you? just curious bc you sound like someone my age.
anyways gold star for you.Author's Response: Sweet! Glad you liked it! The idea for thsi one came to me in the middle of the night, oddly enough. I had to get up right away and write it down! I'm 13. I get a gold star? YAY! You just made my day! Report Review
Funny! I liked it! Very clever...Author's Response: *Takes a bow* Thank you! Report Review
wow, that was interesting...i am not going to lie. but it was cute and creative, i will give u that. nice work!Author's Response: LOL, well thanks for being honest then :) And thanks for reviewing! Report Review
OMG this was HILARIOUS! good job.Author's Response: Thanks! you people are all too nice to me! But, please, no need to stop :) Report Review
THAT WAS INTERESTING. SO FUNNY I WAS IN HYSTERICS I LOVED IT AND I ALMOST BURNT MY HOUSE DOWN TOO. :) or :(Author's Response: Why thank you! I've had a few interesting stories from reviewers about what they've nearly burned down. Screw fanfiction! We'll all be pyro-technics or whatever! Report Review
GOOD JOB !
*chow*Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
No offense, but I do not want to take cooking lessons from you after the mac and cheese incident that you have described.
the story was funny, but I didn't like that you broke down the fourth wall.Author's Response: You won't enroll in my cooking class? Darn! Enrollment is empty. And just to think I've nearly mastered the art of microwavable mac 'n cheese!
I broke walls (and other such writing rules) for the sake of humor. A good laugh is good for you! Report Review
hahaha that was funny!Author's Response: *Bows dramatically* Why thank you kind sir or madam! Report Review
Excuse me while I die from extreme laughter and my ghost has to dial 911!!!
and any other IM that has to do with laughing!
My stomach is seriously hurting right now!!! *ouch*
This is outrageously funny! I LURVE IT!!! This is - dare I say it - actually better than Nacoplepcy!!!
It is so funny!
I love how unbelievably thick Peter is!!! It's genius!
Lurve Voldie's conscience too! That's awesome!
Bella... Well I freaking L-O-V-E the fact that she cried!!! She so deserves the tears after what she did to our poor Sirius!
*sniff* *remembers Sirius* *sob* *weeps* *emotional wreck* *SNIFF* *blows nose*
LOL! But this is really really HILARIOUS!!! Absolutely A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!! So great!
It's creative, original, funny, brilliant, funny, exceptional, funny, funny, funny...
Did I mention that it was funny???
Dearie, you definitely get a zillion out of ten!
I really love it!
And you are such a sweetheart for dedicating this to me!!! *AW* That's like the sweetest thing ever! Just warms my heart! *Sniff* I think I need a moment...
Oh, I can definitely relate to almost burning down the house with mac and cheese... Except with me it was the school and a tbs of butter in the microwave... Don't ask! LMFAO!
-SheaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! i miss sirius too! I loved him to death, he was like my fav character and then she goes and KILLS him off! Oh, I was so mad! G2G! Being yelled at! AAARRRGGGHHH! Report Review
Very funny. LOLAuthor's Response: Thanks sooo much! :) Report Review
Ookay. lolz. seriously. that was truely odd. and very out of character. and really not that hysterical. it was amusing though and i was quite... intrigued. the perptual bad smell in Voldy's house is probably Peter's generally bad odour.
Voldy has a conscience?!
â€¦and ummâ€¦ isnâ€™t Bella marriedâ€¦whyâ€™s she trying to pee at Voldyâ€™s â€¦ goods?
it takes real talent to burn down a house by the way, believe meâ€¦
i love that bella cried. i dislike [hate, abhor, loathe with the burning fire of a thousand suns] bella...
cheers to your random story.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I just hate Bella to, and this just popped into my head and I had to write it!
SHE KILLED SIRIUS! *sob*
He was my fav character...and now he's dead! *sob*
So Bella deserved it! LOL.
thanks again! Report Review
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