Erm...
I dunno wot 2 say really
So i'll just say...
Good start to the story, but dnt hav much to really say
x

Author's Response: I hope that you still like it - even though I haven't updated it in forever. It's hard to tell if you enjoyed it or not from this comment, but thank you all the same for reviewing!

-Addysen

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Woah... weird
Weird, but imaginative
And hooking
x

Author's Response: That's awesome to hear! Even the weird part.

-Addysen

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Wow!
Intense! You put alot of detail in there!
It's a really good beginning... well done!
:P x

Author's Response: Thank you, bmbutlerbabe, once again.

-Addysen

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Sorry I haven't been able to review in a long while. i been sick on and off the past few months. As always i absolutely love the story . keep up the magnificent story up. as always i love you Addysenmalfoy and your stories. I will start to review on a more regular basis. you rock girl!

Author's Response: Don't you worry about that. I haven't updated this story in forever and I'm just about due so stay put.

I hope your feeling better, all my best and thank you for sticking with this. Hopefully it will go somewhere soon.

-Addysen

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OMG! I love it! i'm not much of a Blaise/Hermione person, but this is really good! Hope you keep it up! 10/10 for sure!

Author's Response: Not much a Blaise/Hermione person, Yeah right. You're writting a story about them right now. Or maybe I'm just your inspiration! Ha ha. Joking.

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Ooh. I am intrigued. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Bloody hell!

Hermione screams when she's totally out of it...?
I bottle up inside then punch the wall...!

Well I guess everyone has their own tactics...

Nice... ;]

Author's Response: Too true. I'm a punch the wall kinda girl as well.

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ohhh the suspense! i can't wait for more! terrific writing by the way, you know how to mold the words to make them fit!
PS couldn't help but notice that you've made some awesome banners and i was just wondering if maybe you would like to make me one? if you're interested my e-mail is freaking-out13@hotmail.com. i would be ever so grateful if you would. and again, it was a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I would love to make you a banner. I'll email you right now.

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WRITE MORE!
i luv stories like this!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try to get around to it soon.

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This seems like this is going to be a GREAT story!! Keep going with it.

Blaise/Hermione seems to be brewing here...hmmm...never really thought of that before. I always thought of Blaise as the 'unknown' character...destined for SOMETHING! I love when people bring him into their stories.

=D Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you are enoying it. I plan to update ASAP.

I love the Blaise concept because we are free to do what we like with him. He had no predefined characteristics besides being Slytherin, and that makes it adventurous to write him. =)

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I really liked this chapter. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try my hardest to write and update soon.

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Good, it's really got me interested in the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you keep reading.

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ooh! that was really really good! Quick, quick, quick, update!

Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 3 is on the way, I promise.

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Wow. You know, Snape is an evil sommumaMitch. I hope you understood that. So my guess is that Baise and Hermione become a couple. That'll be fun.

Author's Response: Well, it'll have it's twist and turns so don't jump to too many conclusions. =)

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must say as BRILLIANTas ur other fic
is dis a BZ/HG pairing
10/10

Author's Response: Well you never know now do you... but yes it is either between Blaise, Ron or Harry. That's the best I can give you.

Great rating! Thanks.

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Wow this is a great story keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try and get the next chapter up soon.

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I'm liking it so far -who hasn't wanted to exact an extraordinary revenge- especially when it is from someone who appears to always play nice- can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next chapter will come as soon as possible.

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i'm so excited for the next chapter! and i really want to know what her 5- page- long plan for revenge is...

Author's Response: I'll try and get it up as soon as I can. Thanks for the great review! =)

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Yay another chapter! I loved how she set the book on fire in front of the whole classroom. And poor Neville getting his first acceptable potion ruined by flying parchment. And I must say, that I am truly starting to adore stories with Blaise. So I'm secretly hoping that if Hermione does eventually get together with anyone in this story that it is Blaise. Oh yeah, and being on the fifth page of an outline for revenge is just great.

I know that I can't personally relate to the feelings in this story but I know that you will write them well enough that anyone would be able to empathize with Hermione and what she is going through.

Emilie
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Author's Response: What a great review! I know, I love the rebelious streak that's beginning to show; it's delicious. I love Blaise too, mostly because his character is not yet stereotyped like many of the others such as Draco and Harry.

On another note - I will try and get chapter 17 to you soon. I'm still in the midst of rewriting most of it from my computer crash. Keep an eye out for an email. I haven't forgotten about you, no worries.

Thanks again. You're the best!

XAddysenX

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Aww Addysen, another great chapter to a promising story. I'm sorry that this story is actually based on a version of what happened to you. But it should be good for you to get it all out and have Hermione get the revenge on Harry that you never got to get on the hockey player. I must say though, I really liked your first description of Harry's hair "disorderly onyx mane of hair", quite impressive.

Emilie
=^_^=

Author's Response: Thanks Emilie. I really am having fun with this story to be honest. I find it exciting that I'm able to think up things to do to Harry that I never was about to (or would dare to) do in real life. It's a rough start but I think I'll do just fine.

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this is the best story ever finish it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will!

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like it so far. write more :)

Author's Response: Thanks I will.

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So Hermione has lost it? I dont think so. I just believe that she's stressed out with everything that's going on in her life. Perhaps if Snape actually had a life that wasnt solely based on torturing and harrassing his students, he'd know that, now wouldnt he?

And does this fic end up having some HG/BZ action in it? cuz if it did, that would be awesome

Author's Response: Hmm, perhaps . . . To all of your questions. ;P. Thank you for reviewing!

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HeyHi, It's me. I can already tell that I'm going to get hooked on this one too. I'm so glad that you didnt end up a bitter, hateful, woman who hates all men. Some people turn out like that, and it's not pretty. Youre venting your anger on something more constructive. And I believe that I am one of those girls who have been led on by a guy(at least i think) and then dropped on my ass(that part is true). This guy who was supposedly my boyfriend had spent lots of time with me during the summer(mostly phonecalls) and suddenly stopped having any form of contact with me once school started. Lucky we went to different schools cuz I would have really got on him. I dont know what it was that I would have done, but i would have done it. We havent even officially broken up, so... technically we're still together. He was my first boyfriend, so you can only imagine how bad I felt.

Now Harry, and boys like him are a different story. They can REALLY scar a girl. And I wonder how he was gonna keep Hermione from finding out about Ginny or vice versa? Boys really need to grow brains, for they do not think at all. They also need to grow hearts too. But that's what women are for, I guess.

Author's Response: It's a horrible feeling to know that you have been taken advantage of and that things have somehow jumped out of your control! I hear you loud and clear.

Thanks for reviewing! And take care.

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this story is sooo cool!!! i love it!! please post the next chapter soon!! PLEASE!! i would die without it!!!

Author's Response: I'm in the middle of it. I've been trying to find time to write it as best I can but I also work 7 days a week so... time's a bit hard to come by. I'll try though. =)

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