This one shot is incredible. Honestly, it is. The sentiments that you are able to convey simply though careful word choice, the undercurrent of emotions in your dialogue- it's wonderful. Gah! This one-shot is a novella that should be written. Honestly, it needs to be written. :) You should write it *puppy dog eyes*! I want to know more about their relationship, how it developed, how it's going to change.
I think that what is important is that Daphne is a living, breathing character, not merely a role. I think I have read quite a few stories where Hermione tries to "be a Daphne" (as you write Daphne) to Draco, and it doesn't quite work.
Thanks for posting! It was a pleasure to read. Cheers-
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Beautiful. So elegant and simple, and not OOC. The bond between the two is obviously a strong one, even if it isn't evident between the two at the beginning, which would explain why he willingly let down his guard.
I love using background characters, because you really only have the looks and the name to go by. Other than that, you're free to create. That's why I love Daphne.
Great job, again :)Author's Response: :D THANK YOU!!! All of your reviews have made me smile.
I love Daphne. We can either make her an evil, spoiled Death Eater, or the kind girl who is only in Slytherin because of her cunning. I'm glad others share the same thoughts. :) Report Review
Good job on making Draco believable. His friendship with Daphne could have been expanded to show depth but otherwise it was good. The funny thing is, in canon he marries Daphne's younger sister.Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review. :)
And I didn't know that! Wow! Report Review
That was really well done! I really enjoyed the simplicity and eloquency.Author's Response: Thank you! That was exactly what I was going for when I wrote it. I wanted to get down to just raw emotion. I'm glad you liked it! =D Report Review
This fic was really sweet and not at all OOC. I loved it. 10/10 ^_^Author's Response: Thank you! =D I love Daphne because we know practically nothing about her, so we can make her into whatever we want. Thanks so much! Report Review
I already read it and I already told you how much it rocked. Love you forever, chica.
10/10 duh.Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
Ummm... draco/daphne? Unusual pairing! Good story, keep writing! You have all the freedom you want to use Daphne and modify her character in order to fit to any situation because not much is written about her in the books. Creative indeed!Author's Response: Thank you! I was searching through an encyclopedia of Harry Potter characters and I came across her. She sounded interesting, so I decided to use her instead of Hermione. I wasn't sure how people would react to it, but I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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