i love. amazing story.Author's Response: Thanks bunches Report Review
i really really really liked itAuthor's Response: Danke schoen! Report Review
Aw so cute!!Author's Response: THANKS BUNCHES! Report Review
Haha! That was so weird and fluffy and... strange, really, but I enjoyed it. :) I'm still smiling now, thinking of something like... Did it happen just like that? LOL. Well, this is a good bedtime story. ;)Author's Response: I think it did happen like that...or at least it did in my mind. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
well its me from the forums!
and well that was a nice fluff... well its not my type so to speak because i have a certain idea of canon that is not beound to change and everything of mine is based on that...
and i have a feeling you rushed through the one-shot... you could have lengthened it...
and there was one thing in particular that made me crack up >> “Well, I do party like an animal, but I do believe Moony would still snap me in two in a second, though he might be sorry for it later.” >> too good!!!
well good luck with your stories!!!
will review one more once you have finished reviewing mine...Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll check out yours as soon as possible. Thanks for the critique! Report Review
It was a really good story, but it went fast. One moment, Lily hates him, the next she kisses him, and the next they're getting married. It's a bit confusing, but overall a good story.
CarrieAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Hmm, It has to go fast to be a one shot, but I probably could have lengthened it. I'll keep it in mind for the next time I write a 1-shot. Report Review
I've read all your stories, and I just wanted to say I enjoyed all of them - you're a very humorous writer, which is a real talent.Author's Response: Thanks tons! Report Review
Good..but the whole marriage thing was way too fast! They just started going out!Author's Response: They haven't gotten married yet! Lily just said yes. Anyway, thanks for the review. Report Review
Lol...way to go..Author's Response: Thanks bunches! Report Review
thats was nice, just one thing, after each speech put a ',' instead of a full-stop.
nice story :)
~hlj~Author's Response: Thanks! I like criticism, I'm still pretty new so I know I still have plenty of room to improve. Report Review
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