Nice! Very good!

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a good chapie you're doing well

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I liked it. Well done!

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Very good! It was short, but it was really good. well done

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one question-Why so short?

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awsome! The only improvment you really need to make is try to make the storys a little longer. Other than that, YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!

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are you sure this is a ron/hermione because if it is the story seems to not fit it sounded more of like a draco/hermione.but anyway this a good fic.

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I love the story so far. Pleeeeeaaassse write more. I cannot wait for more chapters. As much as I like the Draco and Hermione, I hope that Ron wakes up and sees Hermione differently and falls in love with her at then end. It is so sad to see hermione upset for Ron being with Padma. Please write more and let there be longer chapters. They are way too short. Keep writing, your story is good.

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Your story is good and really can become something really good later on if you keep writing more chapters. Make Ron see that Hermione is the gal for him, not Padma. Also, make Ron sweat so that he tries to beg for Hermione back or at least try to show her he loves her and make Hermione show Ron that she is hard to get but love wins all at the end. So please write more chapters and make them much longer, the story is too short.

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Hey, This story is awesome. You need to update ASAP! I don\'t know how you did it, but you ACTUALLY made DRACO sweet! AHH! There\'s a thinker! Caty

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It\'s really great, but its moving a little fast. Give me more! E-mail me if you need any stories reviewed before you publish them.

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Sorry, my e-mail was typed wrong in the last one.

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You just have to stop writing just as it was getting good didnt you? Keep it up I cant wait for chapter 5!!!!!!!!!!

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Okay okay good. But is it more of a Draco/ Hermoine Fic here? Will Ron and Hermoine get back together in later Chapters? If not Then this should be a Draco/ Hermoine fic. Sorry to be so foward, Rory Summers XOXO

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This was really really good. I love the fight that they are both going through. cause it seems like draco wants hermione, but she\'s a mudblood and theirs pansy. and hermioen wants draco but she doesn\'t know that, shes just starting to think hes sweet. Great job!

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MORE!!!! This story could become really good!

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hmmm very interesting.... the only hope i have for ron and herm being together is that its under the RON loves HERM section. I didnt realize draco could be so nice... umm and another thing...i CANNOT PICTURE DRACO KISSING AND EXPRESSING SUCH A THING AS LOVE!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAA ok jk that kinda got away from me.... so neways heres wat id tell the men in this story: Harry: Ur really sweet and all but herm loves ron. ron is being an arse but just dont get too friendly with herm. Dumbledore: Ur off ur ROCKER! WAT IS THE MATTER WITH U MAKING DRACO AND HERM HEADS TOGETHER?? Draco: REMEMBER SHES A MUDBLOOD, (SORRY HERM) U DONT LIKE MUDBLOODS! BE HAPPY U MADE IT WITH PANSY. Ron: WAT THE FO IS THE MATTER WITH U? CAN U SEE UR KILLING HER? U BIG ARSE! AAAAA U BETTER MAKE UP WITH HER OR I SWEAR!!!! THIS DOESNT MAKE UR SITUATION WITH HER NE BETTER! Snape: WASH UR FREAKIN HAIR! Now the girls: Pansy: WAT THE HELL DO U SEE IN DRACO? (besides the fact that hes hot and all?) Hermione: Be strong hun! If Ron comes back asking if he could be with u... MAKE HIM GROVEL... then think about it! Ginny: HARRY DOESNT HAVE A GIRFRIEND! Padma: LEAVE RON ALONE! HES HERMIONES MAN! (even if that arse dont see it yet) ok no more talking to made up characters! i like this, just pleez make it a happy ending! i beg of u ps can u r/r mine? its called dance! thanx a bunch.

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Good start! I like the tension you put between Ron and Hermione!

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