That was really good. It isn't the same thing i keep reading on this site. I really liked it, good job.

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Haha. James and Lily really are perfect together; I just can't seem to get tired of stories that tell how they finally came to fall madly in love with each other. ;)

Author's Response: I know what you mean...their are my favorite canon to read and to write about because we still don't know why Lily gave James a chance and that's what makes it so much interesting.

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aw! so sweet! i loved it!

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Aww that was cute =P

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First off, I must say I love the song. :D I loved the story also, btw. The only thing I might change is when James confronts her about her always looking at him, etc. I would keep the bluntness because I think that's hilarious, but lead up to it by explaining how James is feeling, other than confused. Like, I assume he would be battling himself in his mind about what to say and ends up just saying it horribly bluntly. You might also describe her reaction to his bluntness. Maybe she would say "What?" first not really believing he would be so rediculous. Also, I would describe more of like when she stands up, because I'm quite the theatrical person, as you well know. And I was a teensy bit confuddles by the phrase "love in her bones" . . . you know it just sounds a teensy bit scary and Voldy-ish. I dunno, maybe I'm just a freak. But overall I loved the story. It kept me intrested, which is the most important thing. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks Lydia...I'll take that to mind...if I ever want to re due it. lol.

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