6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Gryffindorgirl0519 Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

10th July 2011:
I liked the part when Ron explains why he doesn't need to learn a shrinking potion. Some critism though, the wrong forms of certain words are used. Ex: too vs two, no vs know. Also, the progression is quite choppy, like there isn't any further explamation and feeling between the dialog. One last, minor thing, the format at the begining is a little awkward, like it may need to be centered or italicized or something. Good storyline though.

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Review #2, by meridith Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

3rd July 2007:
I thought it was pretty cute! It might be a good idea to go over it again for grammar mistakes and slow the dialouge down a little, but otherwise I liked it :)

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Review #3, by chick_fic_luver_erin Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

31st May 2007:
short but i love ron and hermione

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Review #4, by Lovehpforever Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

14th May 2007:
Great fic! Very cute. ^^ I saw someone already told you the two/too mistake so I won't bug you more with it, I did it myself before.

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Review #5, by JustSuper Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

10th May 2007:
Nice... Just you mixed up two (meaning the number) and too (meaning also) it's a common mistake though... nice fiction well done!

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Review #6, by ginny_malfoy22 Love is like Heaven, but it can hurt like Hell

10th May 2007:
This is good!

8 out of 10!

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