wow, very different story here! i liked ann, i thought she was funny. and sirius is of course, still my fave. lol. good story!!

Author's Response: Thank You!! I'm glad you thought it was 'different'. It's actually unlike practically everything else I've ever written. I was afraid it would get a lot of bad reviews because I was sorta experimenting with Ann: glad you thought she was funny!

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I like this story, well written, and I admire the fact that there are no e's in the entire thing. Just one thing - could you credit me for the banner? Thanks!

Author's Response: Oh, my gosh, you're right! Oh, I am sooo sorry, Vatina, I just put it up last night right before I went to bed, so I must have frogotton: I am off to credit right now, thanx for the reminder and the kind review!

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crap, thats good! It seemed like it was sort of confusing! though i thought that you did a great job on the details!!! :)
great job!
10/10

Author's Response: Yeah, I know it was confusing...It was because a lot of my word choice was weird with no e's (definately a useful letter, that one there)..Thanks so much for the great review! (It makes me warm and fuzzy inside ;)

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I'm sure that was dificult to write. I really liked it. The best part was "Sup with us this goodly night." I don't know why, but it sounded funny. I don't believe I've read anything else of your's. I might look some up. Cheers.

Author's Response: Thank you...and I like that line too, even though I wouldn't have written it in that manner if I could use e's...but it turned out nice, right? Thanks for the review and hope you look up some of my others!

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Well I like it, but tis kind of annoying how she calls him Siri. And she sounds very childish. But u didn't use any 'e's...so congrats... still intersting tho
8/10

Author's Response: Oh, I actually planned for her to be much more obnoxious (and childish). 'Siri' was only the beginning....but I had to cut lots of her annoyingness because it contained e's...I was going to have her go mega-protective over her 'Siri' and giggle alot..but giggle had an e in it and so did 'snicker' and 'titter' so I couldn't. Thank you for the review Lullybell!

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