I'm crying right now... Report Review
This is too exciting! :) Report Review
Wow this is an amazing story xx I was hooked all the way through and loved every second of it x Report Review
Ok, I just kicked stomach virus, and I'd forgotten Remus gets one in this chapter, so I had to comment. Poor Remus! Great story though!Author's Response: Aw, that's a bad thing to remember from this chapter. But yay for kicking the virus and thanks for reading! Report Review
Wow. This story is amazing. It is so long, but that makes sense since it is all their 7 years and up to when James and Lily die. This is the story of the winding path the Marauders took, and you portray that so well.
I think the ending is sad, but it has to be sad, you didn't have a choice. The Marauders were best friends, and all of that came crashing down when James and Lily died. Its so sad! Remus and Sirius would eventually repair their friendship, but it would never be the same.
Thank you so much! It was heartbreaking to read the end, but it was also so good the way you wrote that Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Yeah, there is no choice except to make the ending sad. If it was happy, it wouldn't be true to the Marauders' end. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Oh. My. God. This was so good. I feel like I'm going to cry. Okay, that's not just a feeling.Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! Report Review
wow. Definitely the best maurauder fic I have ever read. When I first saw the 96 chapters, I didn't think I would read the whole thing, but every chapter was something new and interesting. You really captured their personalities, and explained so much about their actions in the books and movies. I cried so much, especially in the last few chapters. You put the emotions into words so skillfully.
It's safe to say that you could have a real future in writing.
Good luckAuthor's Response: Aw, wow, thanks! Yeah, I'd have the same reaction seeing 96 chapters. I read one that was 121 chapters, but worth every chapter, I'm really glad you liked this and think I could have a future writing. Thanks for reading!! Report Review
this chapter made me cry. very well-writtenAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks! Glad you liked it! Report Review
I just finished reading all 96 chapters and I just have to say that this could be the Long Lost Story Of The Marauders! You are a brilliant and patient writer! It's sad how The Marauders had to end but they definitely left their mark. 10 stars :)Author's Response: Their story is sad, that they all died the way they did, but they definitely made their mark :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
Yep, I almost cried at the end. I knew how the story would end, but you wrote it so well I could see myself as a bystander to all of this. Great story!Author's Response: Thanks!! Glad you liked it! Report Review
This is the third time I've read through your amazing story, and the third time it has brought tears to my eyes. If you would ever see me in real life, you would not think that the beefy 6ft7 ex-high school football quarterback would tear up at any story. Thanks. Thanks for writing one of the best stories in the written history of novels.Author's Response: Wow, you've read this three times? I think I only read it through once (not counting when I wrote it since there wasn't much reading of it involved except to check for errors). But I'm glad you still like it!! Thanks for reading!!! Report Review
I. feel so lost. you wrote the epilogue so. i can't explain what i am going through right nowAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading! Report Review
NO no no i wish remus would know the truth now but he will have to wait for thirteen years! :( I wish this hadn't happend but i knew it wouldAuthor's Response: It would've been nice if he didn't have to wait that long, but then so did Dumbledore. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I HATE PETER! I READ THE HP BOOKS AND I HaTE HIM! I WISH JAMES AND LILY COULD BE HAPPY WITH HARRY BUT ITS ALL BECAUSE HIM! I AM ABOUT TO CRY RIGHT NOW!Author's Response: It really is all Peter's fault... Thanks for reading! Report Review
that was so sad i am crying silently right now. For Real.Author's Response: Aww, well I'm glad that means you like it? Thanks for reading! Report Review
so sad but so nice they named him after moony's dad and jamesAuthor's Response: Yeah, that idea was actually what inspired me to write this whole thing. Thanks for reading! Report Review
i have absolute complete dibs on brutally murdering Snape and Wormtail i also have dibs on serius james and moony for either marrige or datingAuthor's Response: Hmm... I don't know, you'd have to fight me for Remus, or Sirius for that matter :p Thanks for reading! Report Review
that is soo sad what did james ask lily and i am crying rite now at 11:33 at night while reading rhisAuthor's Response: Is it sad I had to go back and look at this chapter to remember what it was? James was asking Lily if it was alright if he kissed her. Thanks for reading! Report Review
You...i...it's just...wowAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading :) Report Review
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that this is my favorite Marauder fic of all time. I read it in its' entirety on MuggleNet FanFiction, eagerly awaiting each new chapter. Even my sister got hooked, and she's not usually into fanfic!
Thanks for your gift for writing, I still have yet to find a fic like this :-)Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you (and your sister) liked it :) Report Review
Excellent that was brilliant! I love this fanficAuthor's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
Hi! I just wanted to say thank you for a great story! It took a long time to read but it was worth it. I enjoyed how you showed the development of the characters and that the story was mainly based around, not romance (like most fanfics), but friendship. You should keep writing!Author's Response: Haha, yeah it is long and I'm glad you liked that it wasn't about the romance (romance is fine, but I always wanted to keep it about their friendship). Thanks for reading! Report Review
*sniff* I'm rereading this story for the third time. And Remus saying goodbye to his parents STILL makes me almost cry. Argh, and I hate the fact that I feel so sorry for Peter when his dad died. I'm mentally screaming to myself, 'why are you feeling sorry for him?! He does not deserve to be felt sorry for! He's a filthy traitor! NO, stop feeling sorry for him!!' Oh well. I know I'll hate him again by the time I reach the end of this.Author's Response: Wow, three times? I've only read through it once and it took me three years after I wrote it to do that. I liked writing the scene where Remus says goodbye to his parents. Out of all the parents, they were my favorite to write. I guess Peter is still sympathetic here, so that would be why you feel bad, but yeah hating him at the end isn't that difficult to do. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Ahh, I just love this chapter so freakin' much. The way you write Remus and Sirius is quite wonderful. I love all their interaction. Whenever I read a story where they act differently than they would in your story I scream in my head, 'NO, they can't do/say that; that's OOC from their characters in You Want to Make a Memory!' For me, your Remus and Sirius are the real ones. I think if J.K. Rowling herself wrote a book about the Marauders and Remus and Sirius had different personalities than they do in here, I would consider them OOC.Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter, so I'm glad you liked it :) Haha, that's funny. I really would love if JKR wrote a story about the Marauders. It would be interesting to see how Sirius and Remus act as kids in her eyes. They're definitely my favorite characters to write. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Great chapter. :) Soo...how exactly did Sirius convince Remus to eat four helpings of dinner?? :)Author's Response: Sirius likes to annoy Remus to the point of insanity, so clearly that was it :-p Thanks for reading! Report Review
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