Very nice! Loved it. Report Review
Hi Defying Expectations
It was really good. U know am quite a Hermione/Snape shipper myself but, there r very few fan-fics on it.
But, u did a real nice job and the overall effect was nice. And ofcourse u made our bushy-hair bookworm look nice, d description of dress n all was quite elaborative but, certainy u drew d imagery well.
Although, there is one little teeny-meeny thing i want to point out. By d look and sound of the evnts in ur story, it appears that the ball was taking place in the Great Hall, Hogwarts.
In d end, u wrote dat Snape disapparated but, u can't apparate or disapparate inside the Hogwarts grounds as the HP creator JKR reminds us enough in her books ofcourse through Hermione.
Thats it. Otherwise, the story i wud say was Picture-perfect.
I njoyed reading it.
-Aashna Report Review
I LOVE it. I'm always a sucker for this kind of stuff. Keep up the good work. Report Review
That was nice, but I would have liked to see a longer fic because this one kind of ended ubrubtly.. Keep up the good work.
-JW.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, sorry it was on the shorter side. :) But thanks for reviewing! Report Review
actually i liked it. and as snap was no longer a teacher. it fit. i like it alot. and i think it was very romantic, in a dark sence of way. very good thank u...Author's Response: Thank YOU for reviewing! :D Report Review
damn that was evil - I loved it! 10/10!Author's Response: Lol, thanks! :D Report Review
Beautiful.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) Report Review
One question how could Snape disapparate if he was on Hogwarts grounds? I liked it though.Author's Response: *giggles* Yeah, I realized that after I submitted the story. We'll just say that Severus magically broke through the anti-Apparation charms somehow. :) Thanks for R & R-ing! Report Review
thats IT MAKE A SEQELAuthor's Response: *giggles* Well, I'm glad you liked the fic that much, but I'm pretty sure this is going to remain a one-shot. But who knows, if I'm struck with a sequel idea I might write one. :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Wow! Well done!
I love the ending!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Report Review
Well...not my favorite pairing but a beautifully written story just the same. I like your descriptions, they are so elegant. Good job! =^.^=Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! :) Report Review
interesting! :) but well written! 10/10! :)Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
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