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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Timtamfrog Learning to accept

23rd April 2012:
Reat story!
Please write the next paragraph fast because I am really enjoying it!!
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Review #2, by kingbobrules Learning to accept

21st May 2007:
Although this story is riddled with grammatical errors and isn't done in the smoothest style, the pure emotion of it all carries it through. You really have a knack for getting the reader inside of the characters, feeling what they do. Your dialogue is strong and all of your characters are in character and acting as you would expect them too. All in all, a good job. As a rule I can't stand Ginny/Draco (as I suspect this is going to be) but so far this is believable enough for me to go with it. I look forward 2 reading more! If U have a moment, check out my fic Broken Souls (I'm dead cheeky I know, don't bother if you don't want too!)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I do realize I have grammatical errors and it's not the smoothest, but in my defense it is my first story. I wish I could find a beta to help. But I have moved the story to portkey.org since it is not appropriate for here it's under the same title and username if you wish to keep reading I have added a lot of chapters. Thank you and I will check out your story.

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Review #3, by pens82 Learning to accept

6th May 2007:
good update soon

Author's Response: i've moved my story to portkey.org. it's under the same name and username. so go there to read the update!!

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Review #4, by Journey Learning to accept

2nd May 2007:
Please post soon! must know what happened!

Author's Response: i will post as soon as i can, but you'll know hopefully soon!!

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Review #5, by Christy86 Learning to accept

2nd May 2007:
keep up the good work update soon

Author's Response: thank you! and i will i just have to edit some of it because apparently it's too graphic, but i will update as soon as i can.

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Review #6, by kingbobrules She feels so guilty

29th April 2007:
Write more... Beatiful story.

Author's Response: I have 13 pages of it in word and im just waiting for the chapters to be validated, but thank you!

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