{reviewid: 1618412, reviewer: 'Rupertluver2012'}
7th September 2007:
cute.
just a few problems.
ones a personal one -- I hate the pairings lol. sorry.
the others --
spelling needs corrected.
length should be a little longer.
don't describe what they look like so much.
i mean, describing their make up is unnecessary.
however.
i thought the idea was really good.
loved the song lol.
7/10.
keep trying.
*chow*
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{reviewid: 1547061, reviewer: 'elvengirl'}
1st August 2007:
so cute!
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{reviewid: 1438145, reviewer: 'saschapotter'}
29th May 2007:
kl story. luvd it a lot. well dun
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{reviewid: 1390859, reviewer: 'hpffrulez'}
22nd April 2007:
Hi whoever u r good story Anny! :) 100/10
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{reviewid: 1388420, reviewer: 'sillybilly'}
21st April 2007:
i like the concept but i think it went too fast and it should have been elapsed more in the planning and more in detail in their engagements
but other than that, good job
~ally~
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{reviewid: 1388084, reviewer: 'Tigermusic'}
21st April 2007:
loved it :D
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{reviewid: 1387291, reviewer: '123014'}
20th April 2007:
that was cute
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{reviewid: 1386749, reviewer: 'Kcayleighe%20AnneMarie'}
20th April 2007:
tooo short I read it in like a minute...need to strecth it out more and have more convo..everything is bundled up...its pretty good otherwise
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{reviewid: 1384637, reviewer: 'latinmalfoy010'}
18th April 2007:
wheres the story??
Author's Response: sorry it posted itself and i was only trying to save the song
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