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9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rupertluver2012 We love you

7th September 2007:
cute.
just a few problems.
ones a personal one -- I hate the pairings lol. sorry.
the others --
spelling needs corrected.
length should be a little longer.
don't describe what they look like so much.
i mean, describing their make up is unnecessary.
however.

i thought the idea was really good.
loved the song lol.


7/10.
keep trying.

*chow*

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Review #2, by elvengirl We love you

1st August 2007:
so cute!

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Review #3, by saschapotter We love you

29th May 2007:
kl story. luvd it a lot. well dun

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Review #4, by hpffrulez We love you

22nd April 2007:
Hi whoever u r good story Anny! :) 100/10

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Review #5, by sillybilly We love you

21st April 2007:
i like the concept but i think it went too fast and it should have been elapsed more in the planning and more in detail in their engagements
but other than that, good job
~ally~

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Review #6, by Tigermusic We love you

21st April 2007:
loved it :D

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Review #7, by 123014 We love you

20th April 2007:
that was cute

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Review #8, by Kcayleighe AnneMarie We love you

20th April 2007:
tooo short I read it in like a minute...need to strecth it out more and have more convo..everything is bundled up...its pretty good otherwise

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Review #9, by latinmalfoy010 We love you

18th April 2007:
wheres the story??


Author's Response: sorry it posted itself and i was only trying to save the song


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