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Review #1, by Gryffindor_Princess411 Chapter One

7th August 2007:
It was a tad bit rushed. But i would have been good with a bit more detail.
~Gryffindor_princess411~

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Review #2, by harrylilyjames Chapter One

6th June 2007:
It was a tad bit rushed and had a few grammar mistakes. I would have LOVED it if it was more detailed. It had a nice story-line, but it didnt really happen, because it was so rushed. It would of been soo much better, if it was longer.
But i liked it, just watch out for the grammar.

~hlj~

Author's Response: I know it was sushed. I am writing another version of it with more detail

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Review #3, by Vatina Chapter One

18th May 2007:
That was much too fast, but good in general. Maybe extend the size so it's longer, add more detail to it. The banner is made, btw, check your email.

Author's Response: i know but i am going to add to the story making it longer. THANKS FOR THE BANNER! ^_^

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