{reviewid: 1683862, reviewer: 'lisapotter'}
25th October 2007:
well really the only reason im commenting here is because i cant re comment on james potter has betrayed me so im commenting here to say i think i know what they left behind!
the tape recorder! am i right or am i right!!
Author's Response: Yes, you are right! Thankyou for your additional comment! They left behind a tape recorder, after they set it to record and recorded their entire escape plan! Smooth. You win the guessing game!!!
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{reviewid: 1669277, reviewer: 'Alex%20B'}
15th October 2007:
Hi Shell! I love your story! It couldn't be better =) Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thankyou!
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{reviewid: 1433099, reviewer: 'GenieAmour'}
26th May 2007:
hahaha i absolutely adore the end of this chapter!! Aren't you going to write more?? It would be fun!! And by the way, your description of the wedding decorations was just *fabulous*. that is so my dream wedding!! lol
Author's Response: I will probably write more, but I am enjoying my other story more. I have lots of ideas though, and they should get up something in the not so distant future.
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{reviewid: 1428929, reviewer: 'EV'}
23rd May 2007:
AH!
Love it!
Love it love it love it love it love it!
LOVE IT.
Moreness?
Author's Response: Maybe? I just don't have many ideas for it. I will difinately continue my other story though.
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{reviewid: 1395110, reviewer: 'Cutie'}
26th April 2007:
The idea is fantastic...so far.please update soon. I think you have really captured the essance of an harry potter chapter so keep writing...and QUICKLY
Author's Response: Thanx!~ Its wonderful that people actually take two seconds to respond! It means so much *brushes away tear* I can't wait to put up my next chapter for you!
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{reviewid: 1394411, reviewer: 'emerald_princess92'}
25th April 2007:
This is great! I like it. please update soon. 10/10
Emerald_Princess92
Author's Response: Thanx for checking out my story! Its my first one so its so cool to have reviews! I love your stories by the way! They are the best!
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{reviewid: 1393771, reviewer: 'Curly%20wurly'}
25th April 2007:
I love this story.R.M. Why did you not tell me it was so good.right I am supposed to be being inconspicuos here! That is so good.although the way you spelt your name was different from the way you told me...I still love it...You are amazing and I am waiting impationately for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thankyou!!! It great to have support and I can't wait to continue it!
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{reviewid: 1393604, reviewer: 'mr%20weasley'}
24th April 2007:
Great including everything
Author's Response: Thanx!
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{reviewid: 1392073, reviewer: 'Harry'}
23rd April 2007:
Fantastic writing, I think you'll be pretty close with how Rowling describes the wedding. Very cool!
Author's Response: This is my version of the seventh book so I am trying to keep it in line with Rowlings previous books. I can't wait to read hers and find out if I am right about anything. Thanx so much for reading and reviewing!!!!
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{reviewid: 1392027, reviewer: 'Wellred'}
23rd April 2007:
Wonderfully discriptive writing - almost prose. I can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanx ;^J
It's my first story so its great to get some feedback. I am eager to continue the story for you!
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{reviewid: 1392009, reviewer: 'muggles'}
23rd April 2007:
Great chapter, powerfully descriptive, good use of humour and easy to visualise. Really hope you continue as I want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanx :^)
I try to make it interesting and i am glad you like it
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{reviewid: 1391191, reviewer: 'ginny%20girl'}
23rd April 2007:
I really think you need to write more Your use of adjectives is great
Author's Response: Thanx;^)
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{reviewid: 1391188, reviewer: 'cus%20cus'}
23rd April 2007:
Longer! Longer! Longer! Longer!
and longer write while I review
Author's Response: Thanx :^)
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