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Review #1, by anon

27th April 2007:

awesome! that was absolutely awesome!! and that works so perfectly too! really awesome!! i loved it! ^__^

Author's Response: thanks, i am glad u liked it ^^
thanks for the review
K.P.

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Review #2, by bk4ev3r

Finding the Future

18th April 2007:

First story? I'm impressed in that regard, however; you still need work. I would suggest befriending a beta. Though you have a good deal of talent on your own, some editing is in order. You seem to have poorly grasped the mechanics of writing. (a.k.a. grammer) Many, many, many, many spelling errors. Though most people don't care (and those people fall into the categoryof useless) about grammer, it ultimately takes a toll on the overall flow of the story. The biggest flinch-inducer of the story would be "deer." Unless you are suggesting that Sibyll Trelawney is doe or, in this case, a fawn, I believe you meant "dear." Like I said, find a beta, and you're on your way. I will look for you in the future, but I've already forgotten your name. I promise to, at least, try to keep some sort of tab on you. Mind you, I am a very busy heartless critic. Cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks, I know it isn’t the best. Will try to sort it out though but I am really busy at the moment hence the story was rushed with mistakes.

Thanks for reviewing

K.P.

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