{reviewid: 2771330, reviewer: 'Hayleekins'}
18th February 2013:
i really, throughly enjoyed this story! I'm glad to see this kind of twist on a Lily and James romance. I've always wanted to read a fic like this :) I'll admit, I wasn't entirely pleased with the ending (Please don't hate me :S) Mostly just because I thought it was a little "Deus ex machina"... Like all of a sudden "Hey, here's Dumbledore, and everything is going to be good again!" I feel like a witch just saying that though :S I did think the story as a whole was wonderfully written, and it's a great piece that I've been delighted to read! Just right at the climax, everything ended in a flash... I did like how everything wasn't completely perfect though... Discrimination still exists, even after all the trials. So i'm sorry for the kinda negative review... Forgive me!
Happy writing,
Hayleekins
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{reviewid: 2674820, reviewer: 'awesome%20rhea'}
20th March 2012:
okay chap not that great
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{reviewid: 2667727, reviewer: 'gahh'}
3rd March 2012:
A truly amazing story and one that I will remember forever.
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{reviewid: 2459382, reviewer: 'Molly'}
3rd January 2011:
I love you! Noughts and Crosses is SUCH a great book and i think the story you have writen is really really good. You have really made it easy for the reader to understand how terible a world like that must be to someone in lilys place. Well done, now i will finish reading i only hope it doesn't end as sadly as noughts and crosses.
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{reviewid: 2346686, reviewer: 'Tilly'}
13th May 2010:
I have to say, I don't like the comparison to Noughts&Crosses. I hope Lily and James don't die and- Oh, yeah. That's a stupid thought...
Author's Response: It was inspiration, not a comparison :)
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{reviewid: 2314616, reviewer: 'twinklinghazeleyes'}
15th March 2010:
I LOVE THIS STORY! It was so sad!! But great at the end, yay Dumbledore saved everyone! :) When at the start you said the transfiguration treacher was the most predjudiced I thought you meant professor mcgonagall and I was like NOO, I hope professor adams was sacked! I can't believe James betraued her! But I'm glad he came back and helped her! :) Thank you SO much for writing this story it is amazing! The noughts and crosses books are excellent too! I LOVE THIS STOERY AND CHAPTER! 10/10!!! :D :) :P
Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed :D
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{reviewid: 2214494, reviewer: 'icefire'}
10th September 2009:
Written in an amateur way. It's getting worse as it goes on. The characters are too extreme. Too bad, too good, forgive to easily, etc.
Author's Response: To be fair, I was around thirteen.
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{reviewid: 2210369, reviewer: 'icefire'}
4th September 2009:
Love it! It's so inredibely unique; I've never seen anything like it.
Author's Response: Thanks, this writing was definitely more "mature".
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{reviewid: 2145366, reviewer: 'Hullo'}
19th June 2009:
HEY! I just wanted to ask what happened to your older story,, Story of a Ragdoll... the Pansy/Draco story that was utterly brilliant seems to have vanished =(
Author's Response: i took it off, but then i lost it because my computer crashed, sorry :( i miss it too.
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{reviewid: 2088539, reviewer: 'padfoot_is_my_man'}
4th April 2009:
awesome story! i like the twist on the lily/james thing!
Author's Response: thank you (: glad you liked it
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{reviewid: 2011729, reviewer: 'coolkitty'}
18th December 2008:
silent reader, lol, I'm very sorry :P
I LOVED UR STORY
really, amazing. I've been listening to someone's watching over me, and it kind of clicks with the story, or so I think,lol.
Great story, just as the other one!
Author's Response: Ha, don't worry about being a silent reader, I don't mind as long as it's being read. Thank you very much (:
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{reviewid: 1983626, reviewer: 'jacobblackismyboyfriend'}
8th November 2008:
i loved this story! the idea was brilliant and i loved how cute james was. i also really like the quotes at the beginning. i thought it was a nice touch on a great story
Author's Response: Aww, thanks, glad you like.
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{reviewid: 1944737, reviewer: 'NorthernStar91'}
7th June 2008:
yay ok i was a silent reader but i felt bad so here you go: brilliant story, i loved every minute of reading it, please write more stories!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks ^_^ but I don't think I will be for a while.
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{reviewid: 1940948, reviewer: 'Lexi%20Riddle'}
3rd June 2008:
I am amazed...this is such a uniqe take on Lily & James' story!
You show emotions very well. Pls write some more stories.
I also want to read 'Noughts & Crosses', but it seems like a very popular book; it's always checked out of the library!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm flattered :) And yeah it's a very good book.
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{reviewid: 1940947, reviewer: 'Lexi%20Riddle'}
3rd June 2008:
I am amazed...this is such a uniqe take on Lily & James' story!
You show emotions very well. Pls write some more stories.
I also want to read 'Noughts & Crosses', but it seems like a very popular book; it's always checked out of the library!
Author's Response: hehe you posted this twice.
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{reviewid: 1939108, reviewer: 'MissEvans'}
1st June 2008:
Just wonderful! I like your style and I thought the story line was brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
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{reviewid: 1864031, reviewer: 'heyITSme'}
14th March 2008:
super dx gbatrone ninja.
that means it was amazing.
unique. i liked it. a lot.
Author's Response: AWESOME. It's my best one. I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1862925, reviewer: 'sammieoxox'}
13th March 2008:
yah!! go dumbledore! as soon as i heard the whole new headmaster bit i was like please be dumbledore pleeese be dumbledore and the biggest smile went on my face, honestly .. I LOOVE THAT MANN!!
and btw i loove your story, its just soo real
Author's Response: I love him too.
*sigh*
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{reviewid: 1779322, reviewer: 'Debbie'}
5th January 2008:
I only give you 9/10 and not 10/10 because in my opinion, there isn't enough Lily and James. But the story was absolutely amazing *claps enthusiastically* i loved how you explored the racism in the magical world, a perfect way to explain how the world was the way it was at the beginning of the Harry Potter books.
Author's Response: Well that's fair enough. Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
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{reviewid: 1755223, reviewer: 'Brooke'}
16th December 2007:
very well written. i love the maruaders era, it is just so fun.
Author's Response: isn't it just? :) thanks
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{reviewid: 1733648, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
30th November 2007:
i love this story. it's amazing. absolutly amazing.
Author's Response: thank you xD
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{reviewid: 1722287, reviewer: 'Princess%20Di'}
22nd November 2007:
Nice story, it must of taking a bunch of work!!! I absoultely love it!
Author's Response: It did take a while lol thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1722272, reviewer: 'Princess%20Di'}
22nd November 2007:
What the freak just effing happened? That is so so so so effing not right(And if I could I'd curse a lot more!)!
Author's Response: Oof, I know. ^_^
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{reviewid: 1722248, reviewer: 'Princess%20Di'}
22nd November 2007:
I really really like this story bunches/loads! But James' chacter seems a bit distant in this story. Just saying, of course!
Author's Response: It's all right, I can see why you might think that. Glad you like it :D
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{reviewid: 1722234, reviewer: 'Princess%20Di'}
22nd November 2007:
I absoutely loved this chapter(as I do every chapter!). But I thought that Padfoot wasn't all up in that whole pure-blood stuff, just a thought!
.:Princess Di:.
Author's Response: Yeah, but this story is a bit OTT in most areas, I just wanted there to be a bit of conflict.
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