Hey!!! Very interesting beginning! Please post soon!! Toodles!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanx! Love that you liked it! I will try to post soon, though it does take a long time for chapters to get validated on this site... well, ciao!

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absolutly loved it,.please update quickly

Author's Response: thanx! glad u liked it!

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I like it. It's different, but that makes it good. Can't wait to find out how James tries to get Lily, and how LIly falls for him. 10/10!!

Author's Response: thanx, I'v been reading stories on this site for a while, and most of the j/l stories were all mostly alike, so I decided to write one that was different. =)

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omg! totally loved it. Loved the adjectives and every thing.

Author's Response: thanx!

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I think the plot is absolutely amazing! Obviously, 'cos it's what attracted me to the story. See, i dont really like to read stories which are only one chapter long because i can't really decided whether i like them or not, but i had to read and favouite this one in case i lost it =D Anyhoo, so far it seems pretty good. I couldnt see any mistakes or nothing like that but as for the story, i guess it's not really developed enough for me to talk about it - i dont think that'd be fair. So, update soon so i can make my mind up about it...please =P

-Alex-

Author's Response: Thanx! I'm rly proud of the plot. I tried to post the second chapter, but it was rejected because of spaces or something, so I hav to post it again. It might take longer to...

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interesting concept plz continue

Author's Response: Thanks! I worked very hard on it

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