Wow, this is sounding really interesting. I like how you've started the story off in such an interesting manner - it's unusual, and well-written, and everything that makes me want to read more. The interspersed italics are a very nice touch, as well. This style is brilliant - need more. Right. now.
Haha! Get cracking, then!
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This is developing into something that seems really interesting. I can't wait to see how it pans out, and you have a great way of telling the story, as I said last review. Really, I'm loving this story. It's going on my favourites, it's really great. Report Review
This sounds like a really interesting story, and I like the type of narrative you've got going, I enjoy autobiography-sort-of type storytelling. I did notice a couple of times when, when you're using a plural, you use an apostrophe. You did this in Valentine's, and parent's. You don't need the apostrophe, it is Valentines and parents. But I really do like this story, it sounds very interesting, and could well end up on my favourites list. Report Review
i loved this chapter. again, i think you captured the period of time perfectly and i really enjoy the past vs present bits. a nice way to end the chapter, too.
nellie Report Review
this sounds really interesting, i think its a great idea. im so glad that i decided to take a look at this! i find one problem with a lot of fanfiction is that the writing doesnt fit with the era, but i think the language and writing that you used is excellent for the time that it is set. im looking forward to reading more of this as its not often you come across a tom riddle story. but if written well they can be so amazing. =D Report Review
Again, wonderful. Report Review
You have a beautiful, flowing, and believable style. I love this story so far! Report Review
Love this story! When are you going to update again?Author's Response: According to Ebay, my laptops new powercord should arrive in good ol' Australia within atleast a week, so I'll have two full length chapters to submit by then. Thanks for reading! Report Review
This story is so wonderful! One of the best Tom Riddle/OC stories out there! When are you going to update again?Author's Response: Thankyou for reviewing, the lack of updates is the result of a very tragic occurence - my laptops powercable split. So I've been waiting for two weeks to have a new one sent from Hong Kong. It's positively irritating because I have the new chapter ready to upload! Report Review
very cute, very good build up of anticipation Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review again, I'm glad it achieved that rather then just boring you silly. Report Review
very beautifully written. the last paragraph in particular stands outAuthor's Response: Thankyou for your review (and compliment)
I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapter. xo Report Review
I really enjoyed this. I think it's rather difficult trying to find Riddle-era fanfiction. (Or at least it is for me.) I'm working on one myself, actually, but it's focused on the Blacks (Walburga, specifically).
Anyways, hopefully you'll update soon. I loved this. (:Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean, it's near impossible to find a good Riddle-era fic, or maybe I'm just looking in the wrong place. Long story short, I took it upon myself to write one. I'll be on the lookout for your fic, Walburga was going to feature in my fic as a socialite in later chapters. Thanks for taking the time to review! =) Report Review
hey this is really good...please continue!Author's Response: Thanks for you review, I intend to keep on going! =) Report Review
it was good, i am waiting for the next chapter. hope you update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks for being my first reviewer and I hope you'll read my next chapters. Report Review
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