great story wish you would do more on it i would like to read the restAuthor's Response: Thank you. I don't think I'm going to write any more on this, sorry, one-shots are my speciality, they're what my writing style is geared for. I appreciate the sentiment though. Report Review
It's a good story. You could maybe make it more dramatic? I always have trouble thinking of constructive criticism. Anyway, good work.Author's Response: Yeah, I know this one's not too great, it's a first draft that I wrote in an hour or so. But, I'd be happy to hear any suggestions about how to make it more dramatic, they'd be really helpful to me. But, thanks for the good words, they're an author's food. Report Review
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