Reading Reviews for Behind the Veil
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Review #1, by Snapegirl The first step

14th December 2007:
I really enjoyed this. I especially like how you brought Alice Longbottom into it, no one really does much with her. And I like that Neville is also instrumental in bringing down Voldemort. But where is Sirius?

Author's Response: Yes, I have to finish that story yet. Sirius will be in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

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Review #2, by miss_remus The first step

1st December 2007:
OoOo, I've never read a story with Alice before so this is actually quite refreashing :) This story is amazing so far! It gives readers a new twist of what secrets lie beyond the veil.

Hmm, I wonder how Snape was talking to Lily... Was it just his own reality, or sre both of Harry's parents actually there? This is so intrigueing (and long lol! I had to stop and start again several times to finish it) I seriously hope that you continue this because it's extremely well-written and very engaging!! 10/10

Author's Response: Hi Miss Remus,

wow thank you! I think alice has lots of possibilities hidden inside her, her life moved me almost as much as that of Severus.

Lily wasn't there, she only existed in Severus' nightmare (not exactly nightmare, it's kind of a personal hell, where the prisoner and the guard and the judge are all the same person). I hope that explains. I had no time to go on with that story and to tell the truth it hasn't raised much interest so far. lol

Thank you for your kind words and encouraging. I will finish that as soon as I'll get some time. wings

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Review #3, by Marina Cartwright The first step

26th September 2007:
This is an interesting story. When does Sirius come?

Author's Response: Hi Marina! Sirius comes in the next - which is also the last - chapter. I'll try to catch up and finish that one too. Thanks for your review! The first on this story. :) wings

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