Sad. Poor Neville, having to see his grandfather die. So, so sad...Author's Response: I agree, but at least his grandfather was old when he died, so it wasn't altogether unexpected. Report Review
This is a nice story. Very good job! My only advice is that when posting a story by copying and pasting from Microsoft Word, you need to click on the plain text button so that the format doesn't have such large gaps between the sentences (I made that mistake, too, the first time I posted something).Author's Response: Thank you for the great suggestion. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. Report Review
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