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Review #1, by bushyhair Surprising Feelings

29th May 2004:
Wow, awesome story. I love your great, absorbing descriptions. Except you spent too much time talking about the character's physical features. It got sort of boring. The first chapter was sort of unrealistic. I mean, how could one kiss make every one change, especially unfeeling Draco. Great job, though. Maybe put something else besides romance. Then it will be very interesting. You have wonderful writing style.

Author's Response: Your absolutly right, bushyhair. The First Chapter is more of an Intro than anything else. The next chapter(finally finished and posted) describes Harry's point of view and the following chapters will explain most of it I hope. I would love your insight and suggestions.

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Review #2, by Liza Surprising Feelings

30th March 2004:
plz continue?!?!?!?!?!!

Author's Response: Thank you Liza (by the way cool name ... (Variation of mine) I wrote the second chapter in a rush so it isn't quite as long. However, i am very pleased you responded and you have all my gratitude.

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Review #3, by blackberry A Night in the Library

16th February 2004:
i really like it. are you going to write more soon? i hope so, you are a really good writer. please update soon!

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