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Review #1, by Natural Amortentia I Command my Spirit

13th May 2007:
This is totally my favorite of your Seven Words series. It's so well-written, and it captures Bella very, very well.

And, of course, there's that factor of reminiscing and basically capturing so much in a few seconds. Which I love. So much.

You portrayed Bella very well, and it went so perfectly with this quote. It was just great.

Author's Response: Thank you. It took me almost two months to think of who to use for this and how to tie it up when the thought of Bella crossed my mind. The other six were written in February and this one was written...monday of Holy Week. I think thats also why it's better than the others. Thank you so much.

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Review #2, by brooklyndyme I Command my Spirit

10th April 2007:
I love this series! And I am not normally a fan of the dark fiction but your use of language and the biblical text is not only creative and original, but brilliantly executed and thought out. I like how you tend not to mention the name of the character being portrayed in each part. It allows the reader to absorb the true emotion and mindset of the person without making immediate judgements. You were also able to capture the nature of each of hte different characters well enough that it is clear who is speaking. This series is excellent work, keep it up! I love it!

Author's Response: This was the last one for the Seven Words series, but bible imagery and symbolism tends to work it's way into my fics. Well, my Harry Potter fics at least. It just meshes well with the subject matter.

Thank you so much-you're the first person to get the point right on, hit the nail on the head with what I was aiming for, and glad to see that I accomplished it, if only for one reader. Thank you so much.


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