Hermione, you fool. He is a prat who has been fooling around with Lavender. You may catch a disease. Sorry. Seriously for the smartest witch of your age, Hermione, you are an idiot to contact him. (Personal rant, sorry.)
Hermione dear, you are a twit if you take him back. If you really want to be a Weasley there are the twins and Charlie. Even Ginny would be better to you.
Very well written.Author's Response: I have a epilogue to this, I might just post it and surprise a few people.hehehe Report Review
Ron is a giant prat. What more can I say except, you have done a wonderful job with this piece. I love your writing.Author's Response: Yeah just a little proof on how thick Ron is. Report Review
Hello again!!! I love it. Again Hermione watched as Ron started to speak, his voice was a little squeaky when he said hello but he nervously cleared his throat and began again, "Hello, this is-I mean I can only do this once so Hermione Granger, if you see this plea you willl see that I am making a public demonstration of my love for you, will you marry please Hermione, or at the very least will you forgive me, well that's it so if you see this please use the telephne number on the screen and call me." Mr. Gragner turned off both the TV and the VCR, the two woman and turned and look at Hermione. "Is it ok if I use the phone dad" Hermione asked crying once more. Is Hermione going to call Ron? The Weasley family is going to be happy that their Hermione is back. Is Harry and Ginny married or something?? 100-100! UPDATE R.S.P Author's Response: Hi again faithfull reviewer, I am sorry to tell you that there will be no update for this tale, what Hermione does is left for the reader to decide. thanks again for reading all my work. Report Review
its good but if i were hermione i wouldnt 4give r call him !Author's Response: Ah well whether she does or does not actually ring to forgive him I leave in the hands of the readers. thanks for the review glad you thought it good. Report Review
Really good. You should most definetely countinue this story.
~CJAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and for the review, I am at the moment working on the rest of the story so it will eventually appear for you ro enjoy. Report Review
Hi! It's me!!! I love it. U make me cry. I have a feeling that Ron would get Hermione back. So Ron is dating that Lavender?? How is Mr. and Mrs. Weasley doing?? The 2nd daugther they had. What happend?? Harry thought back the over the past week how Hermione had been so happy planning things with Ginny. She had not stopped smiling since Ton had asked her, she was so happy they thought she might burst. Her happines had infectious to the point Harry had asked Ginny to marry him, even the twins had stopped playing jokes on them so as not hloud the happiness of the girl they all loved so dearly as a big sister and friend even those older then her thought of her the same wat. What happed?? UPDATE 100-100! @_@Author's Response: Hi there friend, all will be revealed as we go along. there is more sadness yet to happen though so don't throw away the tissues just yet. thanks for the review Report Review
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