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Review #1, by Brin Prince Epilogue - The Revival

22nd November 2015:
Amazing story, plot and everything (i had started reading this a long time ago, but i guess i had lost interest (im not a big romance fan) oh but i regret ever doing that, thankfully i managed to come back after so many years... loved it and will be reading the sequel!

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Review #2, by simply_unbalanced Epileptic

10th June 2015:
Actually when someone has a seizure you do not put anythin in their mouth because they cannot swallow or choke on their tongue. They also shouldn't drink anything directly after a seizure. I know this is factual because I know someone who professionally worked with people with epilepsy and I also double-checked it on a doctor website.

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Review #3, by Annie Epilogue - The Revival

3rd September 2014:

This story was actually terrifying. I couldn't bring myself to stop reading. I had goosebumps the whole way through. This story excels at not focusing on romance, like so many stories do but focusing on the threats that would still surround Harry and his family, and the twist at the end? Perfect. Not many writers could get away with something so daring and innovative but you have taken the idea and run with it! Well done! I will be reading the sequel shortly!

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Review #4, by GhostlyCheese Like Father, Like Son

3rd July 2014:
I love the way you've structured everything so far, but when it came down to how James survived the killing curse, I couldn't help but feel confused. The creation of a horcrux occurs during the act of killing, which I understand that James did. However, in the process of forming a horcrux, James would have needed to split his own soul and allow his soul to attach onto something. For this reason, I'm not quite sure that Parker surviving makes sense, because in order to allow the soul to be split in the creation of a horcrux, one must kill. Therefore, wouldn't Parker already have been dead in order for the horcrux to be created? Furthermore, would it not have been a piece of James' soul that resides in Parker and not vice versa?

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Review #5, by lily Wizengamot

20th April 2014:
I think this was the best chapter yet! The twist ending was so unexpected (or maybe I'm just thick).
can't wait to read what happens next!!!

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Review #6, by naughtymango Freak of Nature

4th February 2014:
Its great, love the story line

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Review #7, by TheNamelessBoy Epilogue - The Revival

13th September 2013:
Aside from the vast deviations from the original books-
the Imperious curse was GROSSLY misrepresented and Stupefy does not fling people backwards, it knocks them out! (+ some more, mostly concerning magic)
-this was a nice story. Good job.

P.S.-Most authors deviate but not so much (mostly).

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Review #8, by eyes like lily Epilogue - The Revival

5th February 2013:
aah!!! this was an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading it. You have a really good writing style and portray action very well. I was especially impressed that you started over to make it canon, and it was, for the most part. There was just one minor mistake. James would not have stayed alive if he was a horcrux, but only if someone sacrificed their life for him and protected him with love. This was the reason Harry had been able to survive the Killing Curse, because Lily had died trying to save him. This was why Voldemort could not touch him until the fourth book, when he was revived using Harry's blood and therefore also had Lily's protection. Harry became a horcrux because he was alive; he didn't stay alive because he was a horcrux. When Voldemort attempted to kill Harry, Lily's love acted as a shield and so the curse rebounded.The one seventh fragment of Voldemort's soul that was in his body was blasted away and latched onto Harry, who was the only living being in vicinity. So James could have only stayed alive had he had someone to sacrifice themselves for him. Other than that though, it was absolutely amazing, it is definitely one of my favorites, if not favorite story yet. I look forward to reading the sequel!!

Author's Response: I understand that, and thanks for pointing that out for me, but in this story I did my best to approach this at a different route. I was using my imagination, and it's my belief that JKR only wrote one way that this could happen. Who is to say that it couldn't have happened another?

While you do point some things out, you are correct in all aspects, and I know that. I understand how it all worked. I'm just approaching things differently and. James was never dead. That's emphasized, and the key factor that led to making a horcrux has to deal with his brother that will be explained at a later date in the sequel. I know there has to be a sacrifice. And there was. That will be talked about in the sequel where hopefully I can provide some answers that satisfy you. But even if people don't see the possibility I do, then that's okay with me because I'm using my imagination and being creative!

I hope you can understand and bare with me as I experiment with this. I appreciate your worry, and thanks for taking the time to share this with me.

Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy the sequel. Hope to hear from you again!

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Review #9, by kirstenalanna Epileptic

31st December 2012:
Bah. I don't really like Harry's portrayal of a father. I'd suspect he'd be so much more involved with his kids because of his childhood. I dunno, and Ginny seems to be kind of absentee as well.

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Review #10, by kirstenalanna Sick

31st December 2012:
I really enjoy your characterizations. They seem spot on to me and I like how you've made Albus out to be the more popular of the brothers. Most fics have them in reverse.

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Review #11, by Loony_Scorpy Epilogue - The Revival

14th October 2012:
Oh no! Of course it wasn't going to be that easy, I should have known. That was a brilliant stroke of genius to put the horcrux in there!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and I think you are a really talented writer. I was kept on my toes throughout the entire story and there wasn't any stage where I accurately predicted what was going to happen through all of the plot twists and turns. Definitely one of the most original stories I've read on here :) I also like how you did incorporate some romance but it didn't suffocate the story and seemed to enhance it more than anything.

I have to admit I'm actually kind of glad I got a few chapters behind, because it meant I got to read on straight away from the cliffhanger ;) Although I am sorry I didn't manage to keep up! I just had a look and noticed that you've already posted three chapters of the sequel! But unfortunately I don't have time to read them tonight but that's next on my reading list!

I'm looking forward to reading the sequel and congratulations on finishing the story! That's a long time to have worked on it, and you can definitely see that the time has paid off, as you have produced an amazing story :)

Ooh and thank you for including me in your author's note! I feel so privileged :3 But it was entirely my pleasure to be reading this :)

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Review #12, by adluvshp Epilogue - The Revival

6th August 2012:
(I don't know why the archives won't let me log in to my account but AD is here with your review)

OMG you included me in your author's note, thank you! I am honoured that you are fond of my reviews =)

This was a BRILLIANT story. I really don't have much to say anymore. I mean, I loved every single chapter, every single paragraph, every single sentence, every single word of this story. You wrote your characters, and I lived their story. You crafted the scenes, and I went through those scenes. You wove your story, and I felt it all happen. Your writing is just that powerful and effective. I was really very attached to this story, and I was literally drawn into it the entire time I was reading it. You wrote some amazing chapters, created some superb characters, and invented a mindblowing story. Your plot, your scenes, your pace, your flow - everything was just perfect. The entire thing just had the right amount of romance, drama, suspense, thrill, and fun. I really really loved it. And I am going to miss this story a lot. I am so happy you're writing a sequel, which I am sure will be as awesome as this story, and I just can't wait to read it. You can count me in as your faithful reader and reviewer for the sequel too. Do put it up soon!!

As far as this chapter is concerned, I loved this chapter exceptionally, the way you did three different point of views and made it all the more interesting. I am pretty sure it was Parker who is alive (and whose horcrux perhaps resides in James) and I am so excited to see how the sequel unfolds. You have me in suspense and excitement as always.

Superb superb superb job!! I would give you a Infinity/10 if I could! I really enjoyed this story, and I am really looking forward to the sequel!

Keep writing!!


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Review #13, by Sweds Epilogue - The Revival

5th August 2012:
I just wanted to comment here to thank you so much for this beautiful story. I normally dont read stories that follow the next generation, but this one, i'm glad I didn't miss out on. Your stories have always been much appreciated and this one was so creative and inventive, you had me on my toes from chapter one. I've been following this story for quite a while now, so it's kind of sad to see it come to an end. I will miss your version of James and Albus, and even Harry who isn't always written very well here on this site ;) Keep on being a great storyteller and inspire us with your unique tales! love, from Sweds

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Review #14, by talltwin18 Epilogue - The Revival

4th August 2012:
This is brilliant, such a great and original idea for a story. I have never read anything like it and can't wait for the sequel!!!

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Review #15, by Derex Epilogue - The Revival

4th August 2012:
Great! Absolutely amazing ending. I can't wait for the sequel.

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Review #16, by SunSation Gal 07 Epilogue - The Revival

4th August 2012:
Oh...snap. And crud. Cruddy, crud, crud! Like Voldy and Harry, now James and Parker are connected. Uh-oh. And I can understand why Harry hid the scar, but I got a feeling that will come back and bite him in the rear.

Oh, and thanks for the shout out. ;)

see you at the sequel!

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Review #17, by parashar_harry Like Father, Like Son

1st August 2012:
awesome awesome awesome
i am ur one of the silent reader but this chapter made me to write review once agn after many chapters. i had a feeling that james will survive somehow and when his ghost didn't appear my doubt became strong and finally he is alive ..but who made the sacrifice, i hve a strong feeling that some one has used timeturner here ( as u r master writer in using it )...any way may be i will be wrong but i am waiting desperately for next chapter.

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Review #18, by adluvshp Like Father, Like Son

28th July 2012:
Wow! Just Wow!

And now I know what missing link you were talking about! James didn't appear out of Priori Incantem! Of course he wasn't dead. But OMG who made what sacrifice... really! This is so excitinga and suspenseful. and oh, I am glad Norah and Al sorted things out xD

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!


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Review #19, by amazingstory Like Father, Like Son

25th July 2012:
Yes! James is alive! The Namkens are dead! Well, one of them clearly! And James and Norah get to be together. But that twist!! Oh. My. God. I can't believe it! Please update soon!!

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Review #20, by amazingstory Shades of Calamity

25th July 2012:
Oh! Wow! I know what the detail is, I know what the detail is! Ah! I can't believe it! I know, I know, I know! I have no idea how you did it, but you did! I must find out!

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Review #21, by amazingstory Oblivion

25th July 2012:
No! Well now he's dead. But he can't be, can he? And that song was perfect. You may have gotten me hooked on that song. Oh please don't kill James. The story is called The Seer! He can't die!

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Review #22, by amazingstory Immunity

25th July 2012:
He just took that curse, didn't he? No! Oh no, that body he saw is going to be his! Ah, don't kill James. This is so good and too intense!

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Review #23, by amazingstory The Jagged Edge

25th July 2012:
Wow. The Namkens really are calling all the shots. Albus better be able to stop this! And this is when James's visions will come true. I just know it!

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Review #24, by amazingstory The Time Has Come

25th July 2012:
No way. It's here! Perfect chapter title. The time really has come. It's climax time! Elias and Parker better get what's coming!

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Review #25, by amazingstory Losing Reality

25th July 2012:
Wow. Yeah I think it's a good idea for James to stay organized. He needs it. He's going a little mad. I need to catch up on this amazing story.

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