very original, couldn't have been longer though. maybe you could do a sequel or something, because you've got a great idea! Report Review
Very short. I thnk you should try re-writing it, adding more content also. But from what I read... it was half bad. PLease rewrite it! Report Review
That's sad :( but really good! 10/10 You should write more fics! It's a bit short, but hey, I always seem to fall into that problem as well...whoops!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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