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Review #1, by juliadiggory92 Saving the Princess from the Beast

14th June 2007:
Good, but very hard to read because of all the grammar/spelling mistakes. In the summary, there are quite a few typos - I think you meant "shine" instead of "shin" and "first" instead of "frist" along with some other things. If you edited the summary, it might attract more readers. Also, editing the story might be a good idea, too. It might be useful to have a beta to help you out with things like that. You have a good concept, though. :)

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