OMG... you evil... I'm so crying... it's so unfair... I loved it... just... can't writte, sorry, damn good.

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Wow I almost bloody cried! Seriously 10/10 because I NEVER cry xDD

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i am in tears!!!
omg
poor harry
poor sirius!
poor everyone!!!

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It was beautiful. I cried. You really created the mood of the piece perfectly. I thought that it was nice for Harry to be surrounded by all his friends at his death and his fear was rational. Well done.

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it was so sad!!! i almost cried!!! 8/10!

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I loved this story! So creative and imaginative, but so carefully written, not too heavy on the description, and the death scene is written just right, with the reactions written very well. Very realistic, I had no problem conjuring the image of Harry dying whilst reading. Well done, brill job!

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good story, its realy touching. thats an interesting plot, ive never heard of a story where harry gets sick like that, very creative.

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This story really made me cry. It was a real tearjerker. I had tears rolling down my face. It really made me see and feel how Harry died.

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aw it maade me cry soz it was very good but what happebed to make him like that

Author's Response: thank you, i was trying to show in the first paragraph, when harry was hit with that spell, is when he gets sick.

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that was so sad. i actually cried.THis story was written wel though... brilliantly. it was nice in...a sad... .sorta way...

Author's Response: thanks, im sorry i made you cry though. i hope you liked it.

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wow that was truly great!!
had me teary =D
really like ur writing
good job..you really captured the emotion brilliantly

Author's Response: thank you!

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