{reviewid: 2244276, reviewer: 'Anoymous123'}
27th October 2009:
Hm! Normaly it would start to go downhill at about chapter two. But this is great!
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{reviewid: 2244274, reviewer: 'Anoymous123'}
| Review #2, by Anoymous123 | What? |
27th October 2009:
Hey, guess what? Thumbs up!
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{reviewid: 564482, reviewer: 'cellphonejunky'}
26th June 2005:
I think you use to many dashes way to many you don't need them to show change or whatever there for but your story is good so keep writing.
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{reviewid: 111836, reviewer: 'apotterfan'}
2nd March 2004:
incredible story, please update soon
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{reviewid: 52429, reviewer: 'MuggleLover'}
| Review #5, by MuggleLover | What? |
18th July 2003:
awww! ron can be a prat but i think its still HILARIOUS the way those to fight! Pleez write more!
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{reviewid: 51969, reviewer: 'FAHIM'}
| Review #6, by FAHIM | What? |
17th July 2003:
LOVELY SECOND CHAPTER. THE ONLY CRITICISM I CAN THINK OF IS THAT THE CHAPTERS ARE WAY TOO SHORT. SO PLEASE MAKE THE THIRD CHAPTER MUCH MUCH MUCH LONGER. LOOK FORWARD TO THE THIRD CHAPTER.
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{reviewid: 39933, reviewer: 'Anon'}
15th July 2003:
I can tell this is going to be good story! CONTINUE!
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{reviewid: 51384, reviewer: 'Anon'}
15th July 2003:
Nice, I liked it. THE SECOND CHAPTER PLEASE
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{reviewid: 51404, reviewer: 'Hillary'}
| Review #9, by Hillary | What? |
15th July 2003:
Well it\'s a good start! I can\'t wait to hear more.
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{reviewid: 51420, reviewer: 'Vera'}
| Review #10, by Vera | What? |
15th July 2003:
OMG I REALLY HOPE THIS DOESNT REALLY HAPPEN!!! VIKTOR KRUM IS AN IDIOT I DONT LIKE HIM AT ALL. RON IS MUCH BETTER SUITED FOR HERMIONE AND WEN SHE FINALLY REALIZES THIS ILL BE VERY HAPPY! GREAT STORY SO FAR BTW
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{reviewid: 51483, reviewer: 'FAHIM'}
| Review #11, by FAHIM | What? |
15th July 2003:
A GREAT START, I REALLY LIKE THE STORY SO FAR. DONT MAKE IT TOO LONG UNTIL WE GET THE SECOND CHAPTER.
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