its a good story. keep writing.

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Oo! PLEASE UPDATE.
i love this story so far.

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hmmm chicken fight... i play that evry time i go in the poll with my friends best pool game ever!!! anyway james and sirius are pervss lol
loved the chappy can't wait for the update
raitng.:9-10:.
angelina {ib57

Author's Response: lol, I know, I like playing it to ^_^ Tha nks for the review

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ummm kinda confuzzled! i think you ment sirius and jamie and remus and sophie right?? ok then besides that good start chappy =]
9-10*
angelina {ib57

Author's Response: yeah... messed up, thanks for the review ^_^

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OOH!! I love chicken fighting. Good chapter! :7)

Author's Response: thanks ^_^

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OOH!! Really good chapter! One thing though, I think you should check over it. Like it says Sophie and Sirius belong together, I think you meant Jamie and Sirius. And after the paragraph talking about Sophie, the a 'she's' that shouldn't be there. Good chapter though! :7)

Author's Response: yeah, I realized that once it was submitted and everything, I should probly re-submit it Thanks for the review ^_^

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Cool story so far. I like it! In the summary you said that you gave each of them one of the 7 deadly sins. I wanna see if I can guess who's what.

Sirius - lust
Jamie - pride
Sophie - sloth
Lily - anger (maybe?)
James - envy
Remus - greed (maybe?)
Peter - gluttony (maybe?)

Did I get them right? I hope so!

Author's Response: almost, either a new character is going to be greed or Peter is, I think I might leave Peter out though, because I can't stand him ^_^ Remus is gluttony though because he's in love w/ chocolate ^_^ that was actually going to be in the next chapter ^_^ good job, you got most of them ^_^

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It's good so far, but I did find a few mistakes.

Oh, and did I mention that him and Sophie totally belong together. Sirius just flirts too much and Jamie’s to damn proud.

I think you meant that Sirius and Jamie belong together.

And then, you put:

Her and Remus totally belong together. She’s

But other than all that stuff, I like this story. It sounds interesting. I give it an 8/10!!!

Author's Response: yeah, I realized that after it was up, but I didn't want to wait for re-validation, but yeah its Sophie Remus, and Sirius Jamie. the other was just a type-o I guess ^_^ Thanks for the review

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heyy sam =] tis sarah =] like I said on Hogwarts, awesome fic- can't wait for second chapter :P

Author's Response: lol, thanks ^_^ I really need to finish Chapter 2 ^_^

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Yay! LexyWexy!

I've already expressed my love for this story, so yes.

Author's Response: thank you Nici dear ^_^

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histarical in a rio vista kind of way especially because of all the drama

Author's Response: What would Rio be with out the drama??? LoL, or a good story!!! I need my inspiration!!

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sweet idea
but you know that witches aren't allowed to do magic until they are 17 right? (Lily fixing the vase)

That's ok...I still like it
I'm gonna marry Sirius one day.
*wakes up from dream*
"Darn! And it was such a good dream too!"
oh well...
Update soon!

Author's Response: yeah, but as JK said, Lily got her share of warning letters, but I still didn't think about that... woops!! Thanks though!!

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