i S.I.M.P.L.Y. loved it...they should've known better...btw i got the bits about darkness powder and never ending stairs,but what's the deal with the room? some kind of emptiness illusion is it? Report Review
i've begun to love your story...really Report Review
I Just Finished your story it was wonderful. You have left just enough room to write a sequel if you wanted i think ill keep a eye out for it. Report Review
Nice story! I did feel, though, that you could have made the epilogue (the rebuilding of the wizarding community) longer. That was what was lacking in JKR's book. Anyway, thanks for a great story. Report Review
Wow, that was a great read! Definitely one of the most enjoyable stories I've read thus far; I'd recommend it to anyone with time on their hands. Job well done! Report Review
very very good. only on chapter 29 and i love it Report Review
OMG this is one of the best HPFF stories I have read so far, I was as excited and thoroughly enthralled as when reading the originals. Congratulations on an incredible story!!! Report Review
Very very good story. I enjoyed a lot reading it.
Thank you for this wonderful job. Report Review
good story but you have hundreds of gramatical and spelling errors, mostly missing words, words with a letter missing, and switched genders on pronouns. Though this review is pointless since the story is kinda old Report Review
great writing..awesome.. Report Review
great story. very fun to read! Report Review
This.Was.Brilliant! This has been one of the best stories I have ever read in fanfiction. Thank you so much for writing this.
In Awe and Appreciation,
ShadowHallows Report Review
Very good! Among the best of the many I have read. The plot ideas are not the same old cliches and presentation is good.
There are relatively few errors to distract the reader.
I also appreciate that a love story was told without resort to unnecessary romantic episodes.
Thanks. Report Review
loving the story so far your writing is great and it flows very well Report Review
JKR did it, and a bunch of fanfic authors do too. What point, at all, iss served by sending Harry back to Privet drive till he turned 17, if, the moment he does the protections he gets by being there die? Think about it, he gets to Privet drive safely, leaves in a fire fight and gets to a new place alive with a bunch of others hurt or even dead in JKR's version. Why not just go to the Burrow to begin with? It made zero sense when JKR did it and it makes no sense to me when others do it too. Just a major complaint I have. Other than that, this is pretty dang good. Detail is well done, grammar and spelling are decent. Harry's change of thought on Ginny is a little to simple and her comment about everything being ok now, it just has too, is much too juvenile. She's been there and knows better than anyone whay Voldemort can do. Other than that, not bad. Report Review
The whole story was very well written. One of the best fanfiction I've ever read. I'm glad to have stumbled upon it. Report Review
Wow, that was great! I have to admit, I was starting to find the story dragging a bit with repeating information. But this chapter had me highly amused. Report Review
They've learned about the immense power of love. Now they'll learn to use it, as kindred spirits, to help Harry's nerves heal so they can complete his mission and fulfill his destiny. Report Review
Wow. That was scary! Again with the teamwork. Harry's learning some valuable lessons here. He's learning about trust and dedication in friendship, he's learning about the immense power of love and how it binds that trust and dedication together beyond the bonds of friendship into kinship.
Ginny is Harry's soulmate, but the four of them together are kindred spirits--united--with an eye single to bringing their world out of the darkness of terror into the light of peace. Okay, so I'm waxing philosophical, but that's how I see it.
Good job. I shall read on. Report Review
Another example of the importance of teamwork and the trust necessary for that team to work. Report Review
Focus, Harry. When Harry focuses, cool stuff happens, yeah? I love how he has some influence over Peeves, but to be able to tell Mrs. Norris what to do...that's something.
Harry still hasn't learned that to include his friends is to keep them safe, too. I hope he catches on soon. Report Review
Wow! Neville grew a pair, didn't he? Actually, he'd always had them; he just needed to discover them. Now he's a warrior. Go Nev!
I hope Snape's plan works for Draco's sake, although the little ferret doesn't deserve it. But it's that ruddy Unbreakable Vow Snape made with Narcissa that motivated Severus. He has to keep that vow or die. Good job. Report Review
The break-out so far is fantastic! The power of love is a curious thing... Report Review
A-R-T-H-U-R Weasley, not Author--unless he's become a writer. (I make the same typo sometimes.)
The plot thickens. It's interesting that Ginny can read Harry, but he hasn't read her. I wonder why? Report Review
Whoa. Harry's got quite the ally in Matthew. Building up his confidence. A little Neville Longbottom, yeah? Report Review
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