Oh my gosh! This is wonderful! I absolutely love and adore this! I have always wanted to read a one-shot like this and I was actually thinking of writing one myself(not that it would compare). But yours is just so good. Your writing is excellent and I feel so sorry for dear Sirius. Good job! :)

100/10

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I thought that that was pretty great. But at the part about where Sirius goes to find Harry and Lily and then it starts talking about Remus, it got a little confusing. It seemed as if Sirius was going to go after Remus and not Peter. But all and all it was fabulous. It's going in my favorites. 9/10.

Author's Response: glad you liked it- i'm flattered :]

and thank you for the suggestion; i'll go back and fix it now

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Very good. I liked how you incorperated all of this into Sirius's point of view. I like the last line, but it seems a little cheezy.

Author's Response: thanks for the input

and yeah... it was a last-minute addition, i came across it online and thought it fit in with the story, buuut i just couldnt find where to put it

i'll go back and look at it- thank you for the suggestion!

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really great story. I had to re-read the last couple of paragraph's to my dad and then he went and read the whole story himself. 10/10. It made me sad!!! lol but happy none the less b/c I know what happens! HOPE SETS HIM FREE! *giggle* alright. I'm done. Really good.

Author's Response: aw i'm flattered :D glad you liked it... i had to reread it several times before it sounded right to me

and yeah.. i reread it and was like... wow. now THAT's a downer...

lol thankss :]

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Sad, but very well done. It really captures "Sirius" to a huge degree. Impressive.

Author's Response: thank you very much :]

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