5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dark-lord--happy-pants The Guard

3rd September 2007:
it's very good!
i hope u past the next chap soon cuz i can not WAIT to read it!

Author's Response: Its coming soon

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Review #2, by Hermione3106 The Guard

6th June 2007:
Hehe good chapter, very short.
One thing, Harry hasn't done his test yet? was it side along... or has he in your story? and i don't think you should of put 'etc.' Up to you though.
Hehe Ron in the cuboard, good idea.
9/10 can't wait to read more, you're a great writer, well done.

Katie-Jayne x

Ps. I have some new chapters, i would love to hear what you think of them... Thank you.

Author's Response: Hi Katie-Jayne,
Yes, Harry has done his apparation test, so has Ron and Hermione.
I changed the etc to "amongst others", I agree that i shouldn't put it. Great Advice

Kassie xxx

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Review #3, by Hermione3106 GOODBYES

6th June 2007:
Oooh, interesting... Very interesting.
I like how you have portrayed Petunia... Different.
It could be a little bit longer and action filled, but it is only 2nd chapter hehe.
Well done, very well written. 10/10 keep up the good work.

Author's Response: This chapter was meant to be a wee bit shorter than the rest. The others will be longer - promise! Thanks for reviewing, it really helps
Kassie xxxx

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Review #4, by Voldmrt H8er Letters

15th May 2007:
one word.


Author's Response: Thanx naynay

to anyway that reads this: this is mi best mate nadine so i no wat she means wen she says this.

thank god shes not in caveman mode or she would hav destroyed her computer. lol

Kassie xxx

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Review #5, by Hermione3106 Letters

8th April 2007:
Well done! Great story, update soon i can't wait to read more...
Haha fancy pigeon, made me laugh.
9/10 a fantastic start, can't think of any improvements =D
Katie-Jayne xx

If you can and would like to, i would love to hear what you think of my story as it is also set during the same time, i'd really apreciate it.

Author's Response: Hey Katie-jayne!!! I'm really glad you liek my story. I'm sorry i haven't updated for a while, my computer crashed and i had to wait to get a laptop!!!! I've added two more chapters for you to read ... hope you like them. Keep readind and reviewing.

I'm popping off now to read YOUR story. I'll leave a review for you!!!

Kassie xxx

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