I just recently found this story. It's very good. It's very interesting.
I like the way you write. :D Especially about her relationship with her family. You also have the ability to make Lucius seem like a good person. Bucket of Kudos for that. Does she know Remus is a werewolf?
Anyway,I fell in love with your story. Update soon,because I hate it when writers don't update then I end up forgetting what the storyline is and who the characters are.
~Wave03~Author's Response: haha! i'll try updating soon, but school work is crazy at the moment...upcoming exams etc, but i'll try!! and thank you so much for the review! Report Review
update soon this is a great story i love it Report Review
awww so cute, i love it! Report Review
so it has been a month since you last updated so please hurry!
i still love the storyAuthor's Response: haha! sorry! i've been so so lazy recently! i mean, end of exams, beginning of summer which means TWO hectic part time jobs, BUT i have actually written the next chapter, though i'm not too impressed with it...so i'll post it when validators start validating again xD
thanks for the review! Report Review
so i love the story but its been i think a month since you updated...im not sure but ill check and right in my next review(for the next chapter)
i love love love love love the story, up date soon!!! Report Review
omg, great chapter!! It got a bit confusing for me, but that was probably my fault, i really love it so far.. great work!
love lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxxAuthor's Response: oh gosh! what was confusing? the lucius speech?
thank you for the review!! Report Review
you are an amazing writer
i love the story so far
Nami's depth in thought is intense
pretty much i'm hooked on this story
my only sugestion is grammar tidbits here and there
keep up the good work cant wait to read the next two chapters
and then some
:)Author's Response: haha!! yeah...my grammar mistakes. Aww well, grammar schgrammar.
thank you tres mucho for the review!! her indepth, intense thought kind of fades i think, so i'm going to revive it in the next few chapters.
hehe glad you're hooked xD
cool. very heart-rending. i can hardly imagine lucius as a loving brother- but i do like your story!10\10Author's Response: lol he doesnt stay a loving brother for very long. thanks for the review! Report Review
Great story! Update soon please!Author's Response: haha thank you! i'll try! Report Review
Cool! I liked it!Author's Response: hehe thank you! Report Review
aww i love this story Author's Response: aw wow thank you so much!! Report Review
woah! this is amazing writing, i love this story so very much. GREAT storyline.
from lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxxAuthor's Response: glad you like it!! argh that chapter is so depressing hahah Report Review
I LOVE IT. Totally awesome. Keep going! =]]Author's Response: haha wicked thankss!! Report Review
that was really good!! yeah it was a tad depressing... but very.. um.. whats the word, realistic? you captured it very well :) hope you update soon!Author's Response: aw wow, thank you!
haha, yeah it is slightly depressing =S but it should get better...
thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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